Reviews of Dragon Ball Revised by LOLRIP - Webnovel

Why did you have to do this men come on broly should have all the girls in Dragon ball

(I'm not very good at giving opinions, thus there might be repeated sentences and words, rewritten with a different wording) I won't deny, this work is interesting, but that's all. I understand that it's necessary to have a good basis for the story to develop itself in the way the author wanted, so even if it gets boring, I won't complain about the 50-60 chapters needed for this work to finally focus on Broly. But after these 60, it seems as if it got more boring. I have read the recent chapters and most of them after 60 are nothing but information getting thrown all over the place. Some were about future enemies, others about Broly's training and of how much of a genius he is (which everyone already knows and it's unecessary for Yami to talk about it every single training), and even Broly's actions. It's annoying to see him getting treated as a kid, even though he's over 18. I comprehend that for most races that last for a long time that's normal, but with Broly's attitude and ingenuity, along with the lack of courage to take decisions on his own, it gets very frustrating to accompany this work. Broly hardly takes any decisions on his own (If I recall correctly). Something else that's bothering me, are the psychological openings that Broly has, even though they have already said that he's pure-hearted and all that stuff, he's way too easy to manipulate and it annoys me, he even got manipulated twice, if not more. Even though it's simple, it's annoying. I honestly would prefer more a "Berserk" type of main character, like the OG Broly or Yami himself, more than this current Broly. You beat around the bush too much, and that doesn't help a lot either.