Author here.
This is an erotic fiction. I know there is nothing in the start but I can guarantee that if you give it a chance, you will probably be having issues keeping it down. The novel is mainly a wish fulfillment with story development. There will be conspiracies and fights but most of the story will be feel good. Even the scenes with humiliation and whatnot should help some of you get off.
Thanks for giving it a chance.
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La historia esta muy interesante aunque pocos caps por el momento pero bueno, sería bueno un poco más de pasión? En las escenas o más largas son un poco cortas pero todo lo demas está bien sigue así 👍🏻
Has the novel been dropped?
All the chapters unavailable.
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It was good while it lasted. There was a possibility of great going, and now it gone it seems🙂
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
I must say this is high class entertainment, high class culture and art mainly for the cultured people out there.
I should also add that the update rate is pretty good.
The poem/song got me. Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Spoiler Alert.
Author,The rest of the chapter is good.But After that chapter when Betty kissed Andrea,it gave a bad taste to me(Light NTR).Even though it aint being done with a Man. I Hope that kind of thing aint happening anymore in the upcoming chapter.
Plot can be a bit cliche but as it's a wish fulfilment novel i dnt take it to heart. updates are decent. Some characters seem flawed but it might improve later so not to harsh on that. Be warned there is ntr so far his gf making out with a friend but looks like it'll be more and from the context ..the mc liking it? ...anyway this is my review so far will change later if I continue to read.
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While I find this book to have a very good store line and like most of the book I find it hard to read do to the writing quality. I think that a good edit and rewrite of this book would push it over the top.
first thing first. this novel needs to have harem tag. 2nd. this novel is good. I liked how system is not a cheat system. he needs to pay real money. system is kinda cheat but doesn't feel like it (at least not that much) that just says how good it is compared to another. although I have to say that romance was a bit rushed in the starting. I mean the first chapter where fmc kissed felt it that relationship was a bit rushed. I thought she would be hard to get. but other that that it is good. I also like how he is setting up business.
Amazing Novel it's different from other novels that I have read. MC is neither OP not a loser instead he has the same problems as a normal person well not exactly the same but....... You get what I'm saying.
I just completed reading 38 chapters. This is a real gem that I have been searching for months. The last time I read same type of novel (1976- I think that's the name - also try reading it for readers who love such novel types) but who so ever read that that novel they will come to understand me. U will definitely be immersed in this novel while reading too.
Sigh, would I try to write a normal review? Eh, no. I just like it and read in a good mood, so it's an easy 5 star from me. Biased? Asf!
Either way, for now it's looking like a standard reincarnated in our world to redo disappointing live, but with lewds! What life without lewds, eh?
Actually not my type of stories, but that one is nice.... I mean, if you throw yourself in time and don't become famous, rich and **** some milfs - what the point of you living? 🤔🤔🤔
10/10 would bang.
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