Reviews of Supreme Human System by priya012 - Webnovel

Me: "Not a shameless review this time, after all, I am a decent man!" Some readers: "Huh! Aren't you a shameless one? Again five stars." Me: "Hey, don't talk carelessly. I call this confidence!" Some readers: "Confident with your story? Meh. Just another piece of junk in the web novel." Me: "You guys are so mean... This is a good story. So don't judge me so early! *hmph!*." Some readers: "With your writing skill, that is just like that. Tsk" Me: "Hey, Why didn't you read more than 15 chapters? My talents improved afterward." Some good readers: "You're so confident about your story, huh? I'll give it a try." Me: "*sob*sob*You guys are so kind." Some good readers: "So, what's the storyline?" Me: "Let me tell you. This novel tells about the adventures of the main character with his Al( System). Finding the truth about his mysterious dream(A.K.A previous life) and changing his shitty destiny. Furthermore, there is a cold antagonist and OP loyal brother. Tsk *No spoiler*. " So overall, please read this novel up to 15 chapters before thinking about dropping:)(: Definitely, you guys will love the story afterward.

I give it 6* my brothers and sisters it's one of the greatest 'ideas' that readed so far it can be better story but it still one of greatest and there is many rooms to make it better but still its great 👌👌👌👌👌👌

I first picked this up to skip time but I was soon so into it I ended up spending all my coins and fast passes so I'm on ch 66 and I want to read on but sadly can't. The story is amazing and also the character development. The mc isn't op yet a least which gives a sense of realism over all amazing novel and would deff recommend

Normally, I would have given 5 stars but the problem is that this novel has not been updated for more than 1 year which is a shame because it is really an excellent novel however. Author, can you tell us if you intend to continue this novel one day or not?

It’s great probably one of my favorite books to read

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this novel is great it is the best one but why are there no updates please dont tell me that its been abbandoned i really hope it hasnt as it is a great new idea

The book is a good read. Unfortunately, the chapter release is too random. It makes it hard to be interested in the story for long periods of time. Other than that, story, character, and world are top notch 5/5.

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It is incredibly hard for me to read this novel but i want to. The concept is amazing and creative (I would give that at least 4 stars); however, the story jumps around too much and it makes it hard to know what is happening.

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The story could use more direction. It drags from 40-60. Overall mashup of Indian and Chinese culture (cultivator logic) feels a little forced. Very little action and when there are fights the choreo could use a lot of work. There is a lot of anticipation without reward. What is the point of building suspense if you don't want to deliver on it. There are many threads running simultaneously but they are jarring instead of being rich. The author should show more and tell less in his prose. Don't tell me someone punched someone tell me what they did to do it.

The first chapter title got me to read it and it wasn't bad hope you keep writing. I cheering from the sideline. Thanks👍👍👍👍👍👍[img=recommend]

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there seems to be a lot of issues, with he spelling and grammar might be from somewhere else and the translation sucks, though. I haven't seen an update since I started reading this two weeks ago, story is generic, he tries to use the dream state to catch us up with the previous lives' memories but it gets jumbled. the character design seems bad, but its still too early to tell, the world background is just bad, but I am not familiar with Indian mythology, or the Hindu Sanskrit that this sounds like its based off of.

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REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is an amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! ADVICE Edits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. There were sometimes unnecessary spacings here and there The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️ And use grammarly! It will help lessen obvious mistakes! 😉

i definitely dp like this book🤣 only problem is the system and its like setup shen its talking. Try to separate it from the story as much as possible . Bc i get confused sometimes like the system is still talking?

Yeah I like this and i just wanted to give it some review. I just spammed space so I could get into the minimum required characters to post this review

The first chapter wasnt so bad it made me want to read more, then i read more and i was disappointed. The quality goes down fast, the character design is truly what turned me away though as I found them to be clichè and just annoying. Let me paint a picture one im sure anyone who has read a novel before will have seen: Mc loves his family but has no talent to protect them as well as being fat, but hes also stuck up thinking that his family can make villagers do all the yard work for his family, but then oh no his whole family dies he gets reincarnated and decides ill be different ill be stronger... Sounds like every other novel right, well thats cause it is.

Every thing is somewhat decent except for the author's use of english, which is garbage. If you can get over consistently terrible grammar and punctuation, then I would recommend giving this book a try.

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..................................................................................................just being shameless to rate it five stars

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