Sorry for leaving the novel but the MC personality is making me feel very angry and frustrated because he is not trying to even control his own life he have a lot of ways to go out of problems and at the same time improve his relationship with his sister and even make her realize her trauma and prove that she can trust men and tell her that she only finds her own excuses or even say his feelings that he really doesn't want to annoy her and he is really annoyed by her behavior and that he did not mind her not seeing him as a brother but at least not look at him like that he have killed her mother and raped her before he even....... Thare are alot of different ways to get out of the problems but he always chooses the worst way possible the make him in the disadvantage side and make things worse even he realizes the way out but ignore it in the excuse of being lazy or leaving it to later or but it in the back of his mind / I am sorry for what I wrote but I really have to let it out so I feel good but your writing skills are very good and for me it's a good and creative story even if I going to leave it I still have to admit it's not a common story and I encourage you to continue the story will definitely find itself fans and readers
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