Reviews of The Demon Monarch System by Syphiinz - Webnovel

I dont normally make a review for the novels i read because im one of the many silent fans. But this time im leaving one. It is amazing continue doing what you are doing and know that many are happy with the stories that you have created. And if tou havent given this book or his original book a try i highly recommend it. You are a very gifted author continue doing great work.

A little sum about this novel now that it has over 400 chapters. Despite having more than 430 chapters, this book isn't even 1/4 done. Therefore, it'll be a long one boys and girls! Now, the book is as the synopsis describes a story about a unique human who embarks on his journey as a demon while also learning of his circumstances. There will be countless battles, cruelty, gore, ruthlessness, a tinge of comedic relief, and romance that hasn't quite been decided yet. The story starts off sort of slow, but after Chapter 16 it takes off and the MC begins his journey into becoming a full-fledged demon. BUT! The story is being edited, so some of the techniques and explanations present in the first 80 chapters aren't present up to ~360. But this is being remedied quickly through swift daily editing. For those who continue to support, I appreciate you all. And for those who read, I appreciate you as well. Au revoir!

I really love this book, I think it's an awesome novel author cause most of the things in it seem well thought out so I must ask when are you resuming it

this is like my 5th or 6th time reading this novel. I really love it. it is one of my favorites! I'm looking g forward to more and more chapters. Thank you Mr or Miss Author. I hope you are able to update soon!!!

this I an amazing book with great development I really hope you pick it back up and continue it again

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It’s been a minute since I came back to this novel. I’m parked at 529 because I told Syph no more until he started releasing chapters like normal again. Plotholes, and bad storytelling nearly ruined the novel early for me. What kept me was the growth in quality over time despite the stumbles here and there. I gladly poured hundreds of dollars into this despite the fact I was broke to see it pan out, and support Syph. It’s a good story overall if you can stomach the holes, but I can’t recommend it all. Unfinished as it is with the errors, and the lack of ending will only leave you with unfortunate regret as the novel progresses into something you enjoy only to be ruined with no updates.

This is my first time review on novel i have read, i drop this at 150 chapter because i hate that MC is so dumb, Demon Monarch?? Lol he not even close to demon, The MC alway let other people use him and i don't see any character of demon in him at all

Honestly this is one of the best Webnovels I have read I wish it was still updating but still this is a really great read regardless 👏🏽

The author did an excellent job at writing this novel. I really love it. [img=update][img=recommend]

Hey Author hope all is well, I miss the story hope to see you writing again soon I can’t wait to see how Apollos adventures end

It's fine overall because it alternates between good and bad. The exact quality varies a lot, I think in part because the author revises older chapters sometimes. Presumably the more edited ones generally are the better ones? That would be great... except that due to the partial edits, there are a lot of continuity errors. They're not major problems, just little details, but there are a lot of them and it's frustrating. In the worst chapters, there are stiff and juvenile conversations repeating info already discussed as if it's the first time, which makes the main character seem like an airhead. However, in the best chapters, the writing quality is good; the dialogue and plot move along at an entertaining pace and there are good lines and scenes. In good chapters, the main character is clever and opinionated and ruthless. The biggest problem overall is there are a lot of filler/useless chapters. The author has a bad habit of drawing something out for many, many chapters. Like walking to a room and sitting down will take 3 chapters, and that's literally all that's happening. Or 30 chapters of buildup for a fight and then it ends in an anti-climax. Pacing issues like that are a weakness of web novels, but if I were reading this as it was released... yikes.

Are you dropping? Or are you going to update?

I hold out hope you will pick this story back up I love the world building and character development. I hope you haven't dropped this all together.

is the author dead? why is he not updating any more chapters? he was supposed to be back on 1 sep but he removed from the synopsis. just where are you?

Overall great book!! It starts slow but it get really Interesting. The charac ters are well thought out and provide some funny relief to the prota gonist. But it sucks they stopped adding to the book and we won’ know what happens next😤😤😤

So sad to see such a good story get abandoned. The frequency that this happens on here is frustrating. I think the story and characters were well developed until it stopped being updated.

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Honestly an Amazing story. Love how the power levels are done and how you’ve handled character development and power development with Apollo and the rest. With how the story is developing it has a lot of potential and doesn’t seem to be even half way yet. My only complaint is the upload schedule as I’m not sure if you’ve said anything about it but it’s been a month without a new chapter and there isn’t any consistency when you do upload so I hope that changes but looking forward to the next chapter.

I really like this story. I had to force myself to stop reading because I like to binge read. So, I'm at about 502 chapters in. I love this, the story building and characters have so much depth that I just fell in love with it. I really hope the author doesn't drop it though. I really like it.

great story and mc and the world building was pretty decent as well, too bad the author couldn't remain consistent. at this point you might as well forget about finishing the story

This book is about cultivating more then anything else a few fights, and power struggles. Not alot of action like what Iwas looking for. But if like to read about how to form seals and augment your power this is the book for you. If you action junkie like me pick a different one.

Well this Novel is well balanced but I am confused becuase is The MC is really a smart man or not... you know he hated human and now he loved human now becuase he has power? don't know I am just into around 100 chapter.

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Great novel, just dont drop it. Please give us new chapters.

Good , really good. Felt like I was enjoying myself while using my head to contract their actions. If it were to make my eyes follow so fast I end up like a genocide flash then yes , I would describe my experience reading this novel like that.

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It's a fantastic book! The story is well-paced, the character development over time is impressive, and the world building is amazing! It is a fantastic novel overall

Brilliant. A beautiful joy. I want more chapters please! Pd: don't drop it! I really love this novel. I have huge hopes! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

So many people breaking ground with their first ever reviews, these people even lack originality when writing comments. I feel like it surely can't be genuine, which is besides the point. More pertinently why would anyone care that it is a first. Going with a conservative 1-stat, can't expect much, but perhaps I could be wrong.

Hey there. I've been reading this author's web novel since around the 80+ chapter mark and I've decided it's time to finally write a review. The author is simply amazing. Not only does he take an incredible amount of care making sure his web novel is consistent, but he puts forth an absurd amount of effort. I remember a while back someone close to him passed away, yet he hardly took much time away to grieve to continue his writing. I hope this work picks up steam again like it did before the travesty hit because he's earned it. I only hope the author's next work heads on over to Patreon so he can get a bigger cut.

after reading over 300+ chapters I can say it's a good story but some of the developments just feel lack lustre, one of them being how it plays out with spirits as instead of the mc being the main fighter and focus it feels like he just mostly relies on fuhrer,Valac,etc which kills me as it feels like any power he's gained is almost entirely useless. Another one is the world development, truth be told other then knowing the planet is weak I hardly know much about the world itself as I feel as if we have little information about how the world is truly split up. Lastly it's his companions he's entered the academy with, Odessa,Nadi,Aaron,etc are all hardly mentioned within the last couple hundred chapters, same with Irauk as well idk just a lot of developments that brought down the rating for me.