A história tá ótima e eu tô muito ansiosa pela continuação, eu quero saber,de alguma forma a rosa vai conseguir engravidar?. E o Jake e a Leah eles vão ter companheiros?(o Jake ainda vai ficar com Renesmee?, A Leah vai ficar com alguém [eu de verdade espero que ela fique com alguém e se ela for ficar com alguém essa pessoa vai ser humano ou alguma criatura sobrenatural?] )
Honestly, it’s too bad this was canceled since it’s really good. I only have one complaint, which is the MC being weak even though he’s supposed to be strong enough to wipe out the vampires.
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Does anybody know if this has been dropped i just found it recently and i love it. It is currently 13 chapters and iust wasnt sure if its been dropped with all the last comments being 3 or 5 months ago.
I would like to write right away that I am Russian, not a native speaker. Fan fiction is certainly well written - an interesting plot, there is no unnecessary boredom, the characters are described quite well. In general, I recommend reading it, you will not regret it.
hey, have you dropped this fic?if yes well, thanks for the chaps I guess.lots of twilight fics are dropped like this.so this is not the first time getting disappointed.
its a great start as well as a intresting idea (at least to me) can't complain with pairings cuz its a fanfic who can complain about that go write your own if you dont like it
but goddamit i need more
Good story considering it is a fanfic I cannot give it a complete set of stars for giggles but still it could be considered an improvement compared to Bella's novel.
Jason still has to develop more as a character,meddle around more and find his true place on the lame world of Twilight,more interactions with Bella, Charlie and even the mother making a cameo would be a good route to continue.
No complaints about Rosalie's romance,keep it spicy and interesting and it will be unforgettable.
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I really liked this fanfic, especially with Rosalie as a partner, but that bad updates do not happen often, but I really want to read it without stopping
I can’t help but wanr more, one of the best fic I have read for a while.
I didn’t really think much of Rosalie in the movies and books but after reading just 6 chapters on this fic I suddenly fell in love with her.
And I need more, the way Rosalie is described along with her personality is cute, the MC is a real one, he does whatever he wants and without caring what ofhers think.
He’s mature and could keep one laughing, to me he fit so well in the Swan family as he takes after the mother while Bella takes after their father balancing the awkwardness and social skills.
One of the greatest Twilight fanfic I’ve ever read. It’s Honestly so well written that reading it gives me the same vibe I get when reading works from porfessional Authors.
It seriously deserve a 5/5 stars.
If I could give a 6th I’d probably would. But since I can’t here it is ⭐️.
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just awesome overall, i love the concept and the wish skipping, getting right into the good stuff as well as thh way you've written this story is just amazing. SO YEAH! i hope you can continue this story in the future and thanks
This story is just what I like. So keep up the good work and please do not drop this because there is way too many stories like this that are just dropped at 6-10 chapters and could have been so good.[img=recommend]
The author writes in a very compelling style and often thinks of things that other authors don't (an example being Jason digging his toes into the road for leverage to stop the truck), and I Find Jason's "species" to be a very exciting narrative.
The characters are written well and the author actually knows quite a fair bit of trivia about twilight (him remembering Rosalie's hobby instead of disregarding her as a Bitch and a girly girl like most authors do). I'm particularly fond of the interactions between Jason and Bella her awkwardness is very well written.
I'm also very pleased that the author didn't have Jason try to skirt around the action and act as if he was a mundane and oblivious human for too long.
Overall, a great and well written story. My only complaint is the lack of chapters, which is less of a complaint and more of me being a greedy brat since the book is fairly new..
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