Reviews of Thara Kal-El: Marvel's Kryptonian by Phantowhite - Webnovel

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I love absolutely everything about this. really looking forward to the more action packed sections that are coming up. Keep up the good work!

Wait isn’t krypton and Themyscira both belong in DC Universe? Is this fan fic about a crossover of dc and marvel? Gidiysitciyciyxiyyoyoxiyxyoxyoxyoxoyx

interesting , i hope the MC mental developement will evolve and go past her trauma without an exaggerated drama

Right now it’s a perfect (chapter 9). Like seriously everything is top tier, characters seems human and can be described in my head by their personalities, the ideas used in the story right now are good, Thara isn’t annoying or anything, the prologue that last for 6 chapters isn’t boring and make a good job establishing characters that we barely saw, the descriptions are good, because deep power up descriptions make me mentally hard. Thara has potential to be super op but right now isn’t, I mean she’s strong being a kryptonian and everything but not reality breaking strong, like right now (slightly spoiler) is as strong as Thor (the author said it, I think mcu thor by the strength she showed), so the power level is good, I mean she’s young so don’t expect her to blast planets yet. I haven’t seen a typo yet, I think. So yeah, fucking read it. If you already seen me comment you know that I like to point out mistakes, so trust me right now it’s good. And for those wondering I asked the author and he/she said there will be romance in the story but it’s not a love story, meaning you won’t have to read 5 chapters back to back about how far can the mc’s tongue can go down random girl number 5’s throat.

I like this story so far, the only reason this isnt a 5 star is only because the story hasnt developed yet, other wise its a pretty enjoyable read