Reviews of The Legendary Tales of Indra

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JustLikeWriting777
I gotta tell ya, this book is pretty interesting. I really want to find out more about the character and the world you describe is no doubt quite fascinating. I like the way you write especially according to this sorta genre - which i like! Can't wait for more! :D
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Tony_LaRocca
Very cool intersection of science fiction and fantasy, in a tale of former friends lost in a battle of good vs. evil. The world-building is where this book truly shines.
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Whendhie
Amazing, well written book with a good plot .Plus I really love books with magic in them 😁. The first chapters look interesting and I'm sure the book has a lot of potential. Looking forward to reading more chapters. Good work author. 👍
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Glenstonx
Hey author! Upon reading this story, you drew me in your book and the action and fighting scenes were really easy to understand, I can visualize anime-like scenes with correct exaggerations of prowess and whatnot. Good work, author!
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Septic_Red
This novel is really great! The first reason is that this is a combination between science fiction and fantasy which is not seen very often today but it will probably be seen in the future. The second reason is the fact that this novel contains great characters with a great powers and the main character who is wielding an axe. And the third one is the relationship between brother and sister
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ky_rine
Amazing! The story is really good and very well written! The plot is simply interesting, one that I really like most-friends becoming enemies. Good job!
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KristineElias
This is good! I kinda just came here because of the forum but this is actually a really good and interesting read. The plot is friendship above all and that made it different from the others. I'm looking forward for more author.
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phoenixhyperion
I love the concept. The characters are well depicted. Thoughts and emotions are describe vividly. Scenes are adequately describe. You did a nice job expressing your story plot. Thumbs up to ya author!
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Tangerqueen
Great job overall! To readers, if you are looking for intense battles and dialogue, this story is totally for you! Writing Quality 4/5 (Would honestly have given 4.5/5, but Webnovel doesn't let me): The writing quality does not impede with reading the story at all, but there are very little things here and there with comma usage (you tend to have some dangling modifiers, unnecessary commas, comma splice issues). The overall descriptions you write and the scenes you create are fantastic though. Stability of Updates 5/5: Can't really speak for it so hehhh enjoy the 5. Story Development 5/5: Surprisingly action-packed and swift. Like I was pretty taken aback when it was like hey! 500 years has passed! But that's definitely a plus in this genre. Character Design 5/5: Very heroic overall tbh, and I really do enjoy the emphasis on the childhood friends aspect with trust and betrayal, etc. World Background 5/5: Very descriptive overall. Good luck! (Also realized I forgot to make clear the 5/5 for design and stuff so ahaha reposted)
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Jo_J
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Jo_J

It's a mixture of fantasy, history, mythology,... but it's interesting how did you put it together. A nod to your imagination and creativity. You've successfully created a different reality. The plot is captivating! I wish I could have more free time to follow all the novels I started to read ;)
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CarpeVinum
It's obvious that you have put a lot of thought into this. It isn't just random 'let's see where this will go from here' storyline, you thought it through really well! And it translates to a great story. 👏 It's very creative and definitely something new, which I love! Great job, I'm curious to see where it will go from here :)
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restful_sins
This is an interesting story that incorporated a lot of plot elements and the MC and MV are childhood friends adds a sense of familiarity...
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devilDestroyer
This is a story that's not just about the strength, this isn't about system, or transmigration. This story is about the different plot elements and how the twists and turns bring about the true potential story.
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ThePotatoKing
Interesting Story. I like the former friends turned enemies trope, though I would like more flashbacks. The protagonist has been transported far away at the end of an epic battle and is now on the journey to announce his return. I am waiting to see how this all plays out!
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TheElisse
I really love this story. It's exciting, the characters are well described and the overall story brings you in and wont let you out with how addicting it is
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_AiRen_
Wow I'm impressed by the fantastic plotline! Uniquely portrayed and picturesquely descriptive. I love to read on cosmic and universal stuffs and now to think Indra waking up after 500 years makes me crave for more! Good job author, fighting!
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Lizabelle88
This is the type of novel that won't bore you. Every chapter has something going on. It's filled with actions, adventures and unpredictable twist. Indra and Daemon will meet again, can't wait! Exciting fighting sequence, realistic and well written. Amazing read so far! Well done Author! Good job! Keep it up!
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Liviing
The story is very interesting. There is no point in the story where it gets boring. It always keeps you on the edge! The plot has action, adventure and suspense which I love and I would recommend this book to anyone.
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Dare43564
The setting is the firs thing that caught my attention. The characters are very essential for the plot to continue and that is good. The story might seem like a cliche but it has it's own elements.
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bibiyenini
Wow, great writing! It does not have this cliche effect on both siblings but you manage to pull off something incredible! You have to keep this up, author!
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Oemar_danoes
I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within.
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Smart_Dog
You just created a wonderful setting. The story takes shape at chapter 4 and I love that there is already quite few chapter uploaded . Reading this novel is relaxing I had to double check this novel's tags, and yep there's the comedy right there. Best flow of story and quality of writing is there. Just WOW
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Itsene07
I've never really read a book like this but I do like the plot. Especially the fact that it's supernatural. Keep it up author you are doing a good job.
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midnight_bloom
Great writing. I can easily visualize the scenes inside my head. I can also think of it in an anime adaptation. Somehow the fight scene at the start reminds me of Dragon Ball Z. I like the flow of events and the author's writing style. I think it's better than most that I have encountered in WN. Keep it up, author. You have a great story here.
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RJMidnight
Your story is interesting and has potential. Your world-building is really good. I find your style of writing has a little bit of comedy to it while keeping it at a style that would get readers engaged. You do have grammar mistakes, especially on parts that need commas. In the beginning, when you talked about Dark Wolf Faction, you kept lower casing ‘Faction,’ but when you did “Dark Faction,” you uppercase it. I won’t lie, at times I got lost and confused because the story will go fast-paced, but at the same time, not. I would have to go back and see if I missed anything. Other than that, your story is really interesting and engaging, keep up the good work!
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YIANUWANGXIAO
Wonderful just love it, I will not explain long for all people here already said I want to express and Is really good your story the character is really well formed it showed very well I love it every thing is good, sorry I can't focus on grammars for English is not my first language your story is really good keep going author-nim <3
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Kystal88
Very nice story! It has a rich background description and the conversations are very good. The characters, main hero and main villain, are also well done, especially since they start off at that 'overpowered' level instead of starting off at the level of a worm, lololol. Continue writing, dear Author!
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LoveJoy
Great! Just great as I can say. You gave a solid fist bump for the character background. Makes me anticipate what he can do more and what can he make me see. Explore more.
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Meyk
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Meyk

Good novel. Has a better world-building than some of the novels that I read. Would continue reading this so keep up the good work! I Really like it.
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