I gotta tell ya, this book is pretty interesting. I really want to find out more about the character and the world you describe is no doubt quite fascinating. I like the way you write especially according to this sorta genre - which i like! Can't wait for more! :D
Amazing, well written book with a good plot .Plus I really love books with magic in them 😁.
The first chapters look interesting and I'm sure the book has a lot of potential. Looking forward to reading more chapters. Good work author. 👍
Upon reading this story, you drew me in your book and the action and fighting scenes were really easy to understand, I can visualize anime-like scenes with correct exaggerations of prowess and whatnot. Good work, author!
This novel is really great!
The first reason is that this is a combination between science fiction and fantasy which is not seen very often today but it will probably be seen in the future.
The second reason is the fact that this novel contains great characters with a great powers and the main character who is wielding an axe.
And the third one is the relationship between brother and sister
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This is good! I kinda just came here because of the forum but this is actually a really good and interesting read. The plot is friendship above all and that made it different from the others. I'm looking forward for more author.
Great job overall! To readers, if you are looking for intense battles and dialogue, this story is totally for you!
Writing Quality 4/5 (Would honestly have given 4.5/5, but Webnovel doesn't let me): The writing quality does not impede with reading the story at all, but there are very little things here and there with comma usage (you tend to have some dangling modifiers, unnecessary commas, comma splice issues). The overall descriptions you write and the scenes you create are fantastic though.
Stability of Updates 5/5: Can't really speak for it so hehhh enjoy the 5.
Story Development 5/5: Surprisingly action-packed and swift. Like I was pretty taken aback when it was like hey! 500 years has passed! But that's definitely a plus in this genre.
Character Design 5/5: Very heroic overall tbh, and I really do enjoy the emphasis on the childhood friends aspect with trust and betrayal, etc.
World Background 5/5: Very descriptive overall.
Good luck! (Also realized I forgot to make clear the 5/5 for design and stuff so ahaha reposted)
It's a mixture of fantasy, history, mythology,... but it's interesting how did you put it together. A nod to your imagination and creativity. You've successfully created a different reality. The plot is captivating!
I wish I could have more free time to follow all the novels I started to read ;)
It's obvious that you have put a lot of thought into this. It isn't just random 'let's see where this will go from here' storyline, you thought it through really well! And it translates to a great story. 👏 It's very creative and definitely something new, which I love! Great job, I'm curious to see where it will go from here :)
This is a story that's not just about the strength, this isn't about system, or transmigration. This story is about the different plot elements and how the twists and turns bring about the true potential story.
Interesting Story. I like the former friends turned enemies trope, though I would like more flashbacks.
The protagonist has been transported far away at the end of an epic battle and is now on the journey to announce his return. I am waiting to see how this all plays out!
Wow I'm impressed by the fantastic plotline! Uniquely portrayed and picturesquely descriptive. I love to read on cosmic and universal stuffs and now to think Indra waking up after 500 years makes me crave for more!
Good job author, fighting!
This is the type of novel that won't bore you. Every chapter has something going on. It's filled with actions, adventures and unpredictable twist. Indra and Daemon will meet again, can't wait! Exciting fighting sequence, realistic and well written. Amazing read so far! Well done Author! Good job! Keep it up!
The story is very interesting. There is no point in the story where it gets boring. It always keeps you on the edge! The plot has action, adventure and suspense which I love and I would recommend this book to anyone.
You just created a wonderful setting. The story takes shape at chapter 4 and I love that there is already quite few chapter uploaded . Reading this novel is relaxing I had to double check this novel's tags, and yep there's the comedy right there. Best flow of story and quality of writing is there. Just WOW
Great writing. I can easily visualize the scenes inside my head. I can also think of it in an anime adaptation. Somehow the fight scene at the start reminds me of Dragon Ball Z. I like the flow of events and the author's writing style. I think it's better than most that I have encountered in WN. Keep it up, author. You have a great story here.
Your story is interesting and has potential. Your world-building is really good. I find your style of writing has a little bit of comedy to it while keeping it at a style that would get readers engaged.
You do have grammar mistakes, especially on parts that need commas. In the beginning, when you talked about Dark Wolf Faction, you kept lower casing ‘Faction,’ but when you did “Dark Faction,” you uppercase it.
I won’t lie, at times I got lost and confused because the story will go fast-paced, but at the same time, not. I would have to go back and see if I missed anything.
Other than that, your story is really interesting and engaging, keep up the good work!
Wonderful just love it, I will not explain long for all people here already said I want to express and Is really good your story the character is really well formed it showed very well I love it every thing is good, sorry I can't focus on grammars for English is not my first language your story is really good keep going author-nim <3
Very nice story! It has a rich background description and the conversations are very good. The characters, main hero and main villain, are also well done, especially since they start off at that 'overpowered' level instead of starting off at the level of a worm, lololol. Continue writing, dear Author!