Great world-building there. Nice description. The first chap already in action that makes it a strong intro. Interesting good vs evil story.
Keep it up author๐๐๐๐๐๐
The story is a different start from your traditional crawl to power. I can feel the scenes that I read and the background is described well. This story has a lot of potential and I'm excited to keep reading.
I think this is a great story! There are a lot of things you can potentially improve in your writing but other than that I think this is an amazing book!
It's a pretty good read. The environment and story telling is done quite well and gives a good scope of the power Indra has. Despite a few errors in grammar, I was held by the plot you obviously wanted to tell. I hope to see you expand your field of writing.
First several chapters are pretty good, I enjoy the plot and hope for the story to excel. I'm glad that there are plenty of chapters to read and continue which I'll do during my free time. I'm glad I was able to find this. I wish this person luck.
Not my usual type of story but I love the characterisation of lead roles.Definitely It is going to be boom๐๐I must suggest this book to you guys.โค๏ธWaiting for more....
Very good story so far and the way you described the situation was amazing good job on your first novel this is a really good book keep going and never give up
The story is very interesting. There is no point in the story where it gets boring. It always keeps you on the edge! The plot has action, adventure and suspense which I love and I would recommend this book to anyone.
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