Chapter comments on the chapter Stepping into the Shadows of the book Ben 10: Justice Incarnate

Maybe I'm being boring but I have to say what I feel ... I feel that the author is not using all the potential that this story can have, the story has a slow pace, the updates of the chapters are also slow ... and the protagonist doesn't seem to want to draw attention or take any interesting action ... this ends up making the story a slice of life. (Google translator)

can you make a my hero academia fan fic with Ben 10

this is an awesome series I hope you can make more when you can

Ayy i hope u haveNt dropped I like this ff

will he be a nanny ??

need more vitamin c ( chapter )

very good story. I hope it is not abandoned, I look forward to continuing.

I think using alien X to create the planets was a fun idea to play with you should try to do that more. Also I'm just hoping for now but maybe you could use upgrade in the fight against the red family, see the kind of modifications you could add to them

Great chapter

you good bro

More.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

Wasn't the first fight in the series with Mr Twister?. Also Wasn't this mission supposed to come only after Artemis joined in the gang .

You will continue it

this is dropped right

Authorrrrrr Dont dieeeee

Are this going to continue? Are this drop? Say anything bro, we still weating you know?

Broo are you okay Dont dieee Be aliveee Make another chap

queen the next chapter coming out

Pls author don’t droppp this made me rewatch ben 10