Chapter comments on the chapter of the book I Reincarnated In Twilight

Chapter is good except the grammar but the story still is addicting. What I really miss is Collens POV in a lot of previous chapters with big or funny situations . Still. I’m a fan .

Sorry If the fight scene sucked, I don't have experience in writing one so sorry.

It's incredible, there are many twilight fanfics but they reach my tastes and those who do leave them, but yours is incredible and if you add lemons I will like it even more!

I see you want to do an R-18 scene ... I recommend that you take as a reference one of the best novels that I have read about character creation and personality development. For the MC's kind of purpose / objective, I was sure he would hate the novel 😅 The name of the novel is "Stealing Spree". It also has several scenes from R-18 that can help you, the most remarkable thing in my opinion is the construction of the world and the rhythm of writing that is perfect, without time skip. It is a surprise to find good original novels on this web platform. I hope and do not drop the novel, as it has a lot of potential, just like you as a writer, not many people bother to ask for opinions and advice. 👌

Thank you for continuing this fanfic and good luck with Your other story

gotta collect them all... here mc comes your ability are his now

Nice

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

really enjoying this fanfiction please keep it up. fight scene was interesting in its own way

Thanks for the chapter 👍🐱

That child save at the end was a fast thinking one. Good work 😊

Am going to be honest edweird was funny on the first chapter but after words it get tire.

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter ☺️

Cuando nuevo cap?? Puedes subir más seguido que está muy buena la historia

Really great chapter! Keep going! Give us more chapters please.

So far i dont see eny problems yes the fight was simple but the guy is too op for her so i sai the it is ok 👌 so dont worry just keep writing how you been doing it and you’re been doing good work so far

thanks