Chapter comments on the chapter of the book I Reincarnated In Twilight

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EnderPL
Chapter is good except the grammar but the story still is addicting. What I really miss is Collens POV in a lot of previous chapters with big or funny situations . Still. I’m a fan .
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Roh594
Sorry If the fight scene sucked, I don't have experience in writing one so sorry.
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RyugaNyxOuroboros
It's incredible, there are many twilight fanfics but they reach my tastes and those who do leave them, but yours is incredible and if you add lemons I will like it even more!
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The_Oldest_King
I see you want to do an R-18 scene ... I recommend that you take as a reference one of the best novels that I have read about character creation and personality development. For the MC's kind of purpose / objective, I was sure he would hate the novel πŸ˜… The name of the novel is "Stealing Spree". It also has several scenes from R-18 that can help you, the most remarkable thing in my opinion is the construction of the world and the rhythm of writing that is perfect, without time skip. It is a surprise to find good original novels on this web platform. I hope and do not drop the novel, as it has a lot of potential, just like you as a writer, not many people bother to ask for opinions and advice. πŸ‘Œ
3mth
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deicide
Thank you for continuing this fanfic and good luck with Your other story
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micmus93
gotta collect them all... here mc comes your ability are his now
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Kurumi21
Thanks for the chapter ! πŸ˜πŸ‘
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deadimp
really enjoying this fanfiction please keep it up. fight scene was interesting in its own way
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Lucifer7030
Thanks for the chapter πŸ‘πŸ±
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Bluewren
That child save at the end was a fast thinking one. Good work 😊
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Shadowles_Immortal
Am going to be honest edweird was funny on the first chapter but after words it get tire.
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MikaelDragonsoul
thanks for the chapter
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Atlas_cf43
thanks for the chapter ☺️
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Nicolas_4773
Cuando nuevo cap?? Puedes subir mΓ‘s seguido que estΓ‘ muy buena la historia
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Sir_Earth
Really great chapter! Keep going! Give us more chapters please.
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Santos2724
So far i dont see eny problems yes the fight was simple but the guy is too op for her so i sai the it is ok πŸ‘Œ so dont worry just keep writing how you been doing it and you’re been doing good work so far
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