The character creation was definitely well thought out and I like the clever solutions/explanations the author comes up with. You have a knack for story writing like no other so please continue to impress! :)
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One word can explain the book. Awesome. The story hooks you up and the characters are well written too. The scene-setting is also easy to understand.
I recommend you guys read it.
The story plot has many details and that's what attracted me the most, the author has detailed everything perfectly and there's anything to point out. The storyline is interesting, keep the wonderful work. I hope you'll do even better in future.
All the best for the future :)
Magics here, potions there, enemies everywhere... One of the most promising books I'd read... Keep on writing and be sure you don't tired on what you'd loved the most...
This story is really well written and this a great story. It really took me to an another world so, I really think this story is amazing. I love tis book and hope good luck to the author 👍
I love this book!! Reading it feels like I am in a different world 😍
The story plotline, characters are interesting. Especially the author's writing style, it's well written. It's so soothing to eyes, moreover feels so vivid ❤️
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The story was really well written, I really enjoyed reading every single chapter. It was one of those books that you can't just stop reading.I truly loved it great job.♡
I really love the way you write it fits into my imigination, the characters are well develop. I loved the plot it's refreshing. keep it up, I willl keep reading this book I sincerely loved it
I really like this book,it has intrigued me ever since the first chapter,good luck to the author working on this,I’ll make sure to support the author!Good luck!
enjoyed reading the story 🙂
liked how simple it was and how easy to read and understand. I have added this story to my library and will continue to read!
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I like your book, the style of writing, very detailed expressions and characters. The way the actions of the characters are explained is probably my favorite thing. Great job.
This is a really good book. The plot is very refreshing. I love the writing style. The characters are well developed and yhe story is well paced. The author is one to watch out for. keep it up.
This book is amazing, the character rropes are extremely interesting. This is the perfect book to read if you’re ever in need of reading anything in general.
Want a story that's perfect and flows beautifully? This is it. Everything in this story is so well thought out and nicely described. It gives an eerie feel while reading, like you're in Marjoram yourself. Great world-building and character tropes, it's pretty interesting.
This book is really good! The plot is interesting and the work is well written. The descriptions are vivid and the characters are unique esp. Lily and Krowell. I have a hunch that the 2 are connected. pls update often.
A VERY WELL WRITTEN WORK.
Highly Recommended !!!
The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come.
And hope that the writer will continue her awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .
Excellent execution of plotline! the vocabulary used is of a wide variety for the audience to learn from. the history created and the flow of the past till present is interesting and wonderfully written.
I will give it a 5 stars since the plot itself is interesting, double identity like this is really nerve wrecking to read🤣
the grammar is good, but I would like the chapters to be longer.
The pacing of the story is well put.
good work author! keep it up!
Your book is so magical just like the world where Lily live. I always dreamt of having to encounter such stories that focuses on witchcraft and sorcery. I love how you describe each and everyone of the characters (and Lily is obviously my favorite hehe) and your story style is unique enough for me to keep on reading. I'm excited with the nest chapters that you'll published soon! I hope Lily successfully retrieved the grimoire from the hands of Salem with no casualty. I believe in her just like how I believe that you are a great author. See you soon!
The novel has a good plot and it appears promising. The author is too good in depicting the emotions portrayed by the characters. The background world build up looks superb. I am totally in love with the FL .
If you ask me to express my view in a word, that would be "AMAZING"
Keep up the good work author.
I loved it I have to say it. The way the synopsis is written and arranged that give an ambiguous yet an idea about the story really makes a reader want to save your work and read it completely . I wish you all the best and really do keep posting for more. I will complete reading the chapter by then . Thanks for writing.. you're so natural.
This book is really unique. I was hooked from the first line.
Keep up the good work! More chapters! And try making the chapters longer. And your grammar is good. Overall it deserves more than 5 stars. Can't wait for the next updateee.
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