Wow! This is a worth reading story.
I love the title, cover and emotions displayed in the story, everything about the story is original.
Continue writing!!!
Your book is interesting.
I just read the chapter 1 and I'm not done reading the whole chapters yet but I think I'm going to like your story!! Just keep wrting! Can't wait to read more!! I just put it first in my library and when I have a time I'll read chapter by chapter!
Oooh I usually don't go for fantasies when reading but this...was soo good, it has a great plot and that synopsis got me hooked in the book, this is one good writer! [img=recommend]
Thanks Author for this adventure and exciting story. I am up till chapter 18 but still would like to drop my review first.
1. Wow! i like the adventure Lily is going through. Initial setup is good - the first encounter at the woods, use of pentagon flame to travel back to castle and the faithful killer soft toy with nine lives! Great stuff. The different magician tools, method, spell usage eg invinsible dusk - all added colours to the story including tarrot cards - rich in content.
2. The second part was filled with excitement where the attack of the castle took place and before that the removal of the magicians due to the King’s decree. The transition from one plot to another is done nicely so i can visualized each scene clearly.
3. Drawing out relationship connection with characters - Zeke and Hazel hidden love, Hazel and Lily close and sisterly / motherly bond. Killer and Lily subordinate alike, Sorreal, Aunt Heather and their struggle, disbelieve on trying to train Lily - all clearly described and i am able to read and feel it.
4. Sufficient details for reader to visualize each scene - descriptive.
5. All in all i enjoyed reading this, turning the chapters. Pls Keep up the good work👍 look fwd to see how the overall story will continue to unfold.
A really good book and the plot was better than I expected to be. There is no wonder that the book is getting better and better in each chapter. Keep up the god work author!
As a fantasy lover, I am loving this! It's been a while since I last read fantasy romance, this doesn't focus yet on love but it was awesome. The writing, grammars and all are great. Surely went straight to my collections. Great work, Author! ❤️
The chapters are so interesting and I couldn't stop reading until I finished everything. The plot is more than interesting and the grammar is impeccable. Overall Good Story.[img=update][img=recommend]
I am absolutely in love with this story. The quality of writing alone is some of the best I have read on this site. If you are looking for a magical fantasy story that has strong characters from the get go, this is one for you.
FANTASTIC!
Wow, The novel itself is an eyecatcher. The writing styles, the cover. It made me interested in just 1chapter. The dialogue and the description on whats happening is great! Keep up the good work.
Woohoo.. . this is very nice novel. Believe me I just losted in this. Its description is amazing. I'll surely recommend this to the readers. Keep this hard work💯😁😁
woah another mystery mixed with sorcery completed with fantasy is coming on your way again! The synopsis made readers want to know what happened to Lily. best of luck, author!
Everything just hooks me in! The synopsis and the novel both seem so promising and extremely fun to read. Can't wait for future updates, good job author.
I love the mc and the story is fast pace. It's not everyday i got to read story like yours. The author is talented and i have a good feeling about the book. Keep up the good work.
This novel is hopeful. The plot is great. The added selection of the Enclave is impressive. Hope that the author will develop the story exceeding. The classification of the settings as well as the characters are high-grade.
The synopsis is simple but the story got me hooked. It isn't everyday that you can find an MC who wants to be a creature of darkness. The narration and description were good but the world background may need some improvement.
The synopsis is quite hooking and the description is just awesome and attractive. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon..
This novel is promising. The plot is good. The added excerpt of the Enclave is interesting. hope that the author will expand the story more. The description of the settings as well as the characters are good.
I love the way the story goes! How the character's emotions are expressed and how the world is created! A young girl who lived to love witch crafts and yet wasn't destined until she was able to. I love how the story went and I will definitely recommend it to others!
**. This is a no joke review. A very honest review that comes from me. ♥
Actually this novel is one of the best thst ive read, It shows the creativity and imagination of the author that it shows throughout reading the whole book. Kudos to the Author
The flow seems good, just like the introduction of a fantasy themed novel! There are a few things that I might can't understand, but other than that it's pretty well made!
The story is good. It was beautifully written and the author's intentions are very clear. But it makes me wanna sleep because I felt like reading bedtime stories. Overall, I can feel the author really loves her work. Keep on writing!
The story plot is good, characters explanation is also better. There are some loopholes but I think the author will improve them in upcoming chapters. Overall this is the good novel
Very interesting book! I really like the description and I liked everything. It was perhaps too hooking. But it's a fun thing to read, like some of those books you can just read randomly.
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