Reviews of The Broken Angel & Her Overprotective Brothers by Nightsummer20 - Webnovel

Interesting. So far everything is looking good. After reading the plot, it is exactly like the story I've been dreaming of reading. There's not much to go by right now since the story is just starting and barely a day goes by since her coming to the house. I'm really looking forward to how this story is heading. She claimed that she's broken and distrustful of people's nice façade, afraid that all the niceties turn into abuse but after receiving even a little bit of nice treatment from the brothers, she was quick to be all smiles and hopeful. It was a bit contradictory imo. This story has a big potential, I really hope the author will never drop it.

Hello everyone, this is your author and I'm here to make some important points clear about this story: 1. The female lead has gone through a lot and the level of her self-confidence is almost zero during the first seventy or eighty chapters. But worry not! She will learn to fight with her demons and will become a very powerful and strong lead as the story will progress. 2. There's no guarantee that you will fall in love with the characters of the brothers immediately. None of the brothers is perfect and they have their own share of past and difficulties. Not all of them will shower the fl, their little sister, in love and warmth from the very beginning. Even though they care about her but it will take time before they will finally appear as the perfect loving and caring brothers. 3. The brothers have a reason for the way they behave towards the fl. Not all their reasons are perfect or sensible reasons but the most important one of them is that they all want to protect their little sister at all cost, even if it means that they will need to be strict with her. 4. This is totally normal that not everyone is going to like this story and I'm completely fine with it. Just make sure to not leave any hate comments. You can always find something better and worthy enough to read. 5. I'll try my best to edit the chapters before uploading them but if you find any silly mistakes, then please kindly point them out. I'll edit them immediately. 6. Your votes, comments, and reviews are more than welcome and so are your suggestions. I hope you guys will enjoy the story! Happy Reading! :)

Such AMAZING and REALISTIC character development...each main character with his/her own individual complex personalities--past/backstory, strengths, weaknesses, flaws, virtues, vices, secrets, wounds, warts, and all! With every chapter a work of art! I am continually astounded that such a talented young author can still possibly have such a full, deep, even agonizing insight into the "human" condition. . . especially the darkest side of evil where angels fear to tread! As a 51 y/o woman who served in the U.S. Marines, I so relate to the utter, shattered, brokenness of Emily. And returning home to family expecting me to be my "old self"... NOT expecting the screaming night terrors; gut-wrenching fear of cruel, vicious men; loss of my sense of self (don't know who I am anymore...I just know I can NEVER be who I WAS)! I have LOST myself in your exquisite storytelling and blossoming novel! Even shedding renewed hope and inspiration to put the broken, bloody pieces back together in my own life. And perhaps even find love, as well... I could easily savor 10+ chapters every day--but I KNOW the CREATIVE PROCESS is so complex and draining, especially when done diligently. Keep up the spectacular work!!!

Hey buddy a small request I like this story a lot can you please update it regularly

I don't know author why you haven't updated in 2 months. I just wish everything is well with you and your closed ones and its kinda selfish but please update. your book has become one of my favourites. and it really breaks my heart to leave the book and i really really am finding it hard to leave the book in between and i mean it when i say your book is one of a kind and a breath of fresh air. so please please update when you can. don't abandon this book and us.

This is a really interesting novel once you start you will be hooked all the way it makes me wish I had older brothers

Amazing world build and mc designs, amazing dynamic, overall, amazing book, character personality’s reall show throughy, my fav is Leo’ ( the trickster) and damonic ( the ice prince ) they seem simpl and are to a extent but have background, so not the typical styrotypes. The devolpmeny is slow in some parts and fast in others, it’ good but could be a tad better.

Very good so far. This gives a good fantasy and modern workd background mixed together. I like how this book incorporates the relationship with each brother. It gives a realistic view on whats its like to have siblings.

Don’t bother with this one, The author starts with explaining how she has a dark and painful past and that she has been through a lot, but as soon as she meets her brothers she is shy and doesn’t know how to act, she cries all the time. Like ALL the time. Then when she later meets who is most likely the Male lead she just stares at him as if enchanted by his looks and then later get’s embarrased, typical beta girl behavior. The author portrays her as a girl with a sad and dark past but she just comes out as a weak female who doesn’t know anything else than cry. You would think she got some level of pain recistance since the author talks about her getting tortured and her bones breaking and getting whipped but noooo, as soon as someone pushes her she just starts crying, screaming and runs away like a wuss

This is a very interesting story with a plot that hooked me immediately! I really lime the characters so far!! 👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💖💗💖💗💖💗💖💗💖💗💖💗💖💗💖💗💖💗💖💗

oh this story has a sad beginning but I loved it and also pls check out my new story angelica daiys. it may give new inspiration for writers maybe

Gostei muito, tem um ótimo desenvolver da historia, espero que tenha sucesso como autor, desejo boa sorte e sua carreira. Gostei muito e espero ler outra de suas obras.

I love this story even though the fl had a bad past and she is afraid of being hurt and abandoned.Her brothers who seem cold at first started opening up to her and treating her like a sister. I LOVE IT[img=recommend]

Gritty in its realism (past darkness, soulful regrets, and necessity of working through personal & relationship problems)...intertwined with ethereal elements and lofty romantic story threads...

The plot itself feels well thought out as the story progresses; however, there are times when reading the story becomes obstructed by bad grammar and repetitive phrasing. I just ask that the author stop using the word “moreover”. This single word is used at least twice in every chapter that I have read so far. Considering the fact that “moreover” is not a transitioning word commonly used when speaking, its continuous use feels incredibly out of place. Especially when such an old word is being used consistently by a seventeen year old girl. There are many more phrasing and grammatical errors that could be pointed out but this one is the most common. I do like the plot and would one hundred percent recommend.

This is sooo good! I'm hooked, and very invested reading your novel that I forgot about giving it a review, sorry. 😅 I like how the MC portrays what she's feeling throughout the chapters! [img=recommend][img=recommend] It is definitely a must read and I'll try to support your novel a much as possible! Good luck writing!

I LOVE IT!! 😍😍 Before I realized, I already reached chapter 40, lol. I have always had a soft corner for stories related to overprotective brothers protecting their beloved sister and this book just fell right in. I love everything..I could relate to her pain..how hard life was for her and how careful the brothers were. I love everything in it including your Author notes. Kudos to you, author-sama. your book is perfectly safe in my library ❤️❤️

Hum, I've nothing to say, really. Although I did spot a little wording issue, but... it's almost visible to those who aren't searching for it. So, all in all, great stuff. Keep up the good work author! PS: I loved your A/N.

Whoa! The book is really amazing and it gives you an urge to continue more. The synopsis is well-written as well. Good job, author! Like it a lot!

It's a solid story that deserves a good read. There are no issues with grammar or writing and the quality is top-notch, the story so far is interesting and the the characters, especially, intrigue me and keep me looking forward for more! The world background is conventional but has been executed well. Keep up the great work, author!

This is absolutely perfect 🤩. The character development, the world background and the writing ability is top notch. I love how the author is able to create this roller coaster of emotions. This is a work well done, author👍👍👍 Really beautiful .

I love the book so much💗💗💗. I couldn't stop reading, unfortunately had to stop when I got to the privilege chapters and this have anymore fast pass. Great work author. I adore you💞

This is a beautiful story! The way the author expresses the various emotions so accurately through their writing, it's just amazing. The character development is seriously very well-done. Everything is so awe-worthy! Love it!

I really love the fate of the main character! I locked my eyes at her at everythig she does (not in a creepy way) since the story was very engaging! Also, the cover looks amazing! Kudos for the author! I cannot wait to read more about your novel!

Whenever I'm reading a web novel the first time I check is character development, and this catches my attention. Each character has a strong personality that makes you want to know them better as the story goes. Well written! I love how the way you wrote your author's note and congratulation for having a million views in your story, it deserves it!

I give a rating of five star because this book deserve it, I really don't know what's inside the authors mind to have wrote something this good. Everything is good from the writing, the plot, and even the continuous progress in every Chapter. Good work!

The story is good and interesting. I like that the author does not make all the brothers dote on their sister which is actually what's normal in reality.

I love the character of the heroine, her innocence, her kindness and her brothers and this book is different from the rest. His story is distinct to me from the characters and the difficulties they face. Mostly I am looking for stories of the paranormal, but its story is repetitive or disgusting, however I love this book and thank you for writing this story Brilliant

This is my second review of this book. Its been almost two months since I found this title and I am over overwhelmed by how many words the author has added. The story now has taken on a completely different take with the new supernatural flavor however afterlook back I should not be surprised the author was leaving hints of the direction of the book since the first chapter. I still really like the story but feel there is still a lot of basic relationship issues with her and the brothers before adding more elements on top of it. I still highly recommend this book.

This is so good! I'm up to chapter 74 so far. The writing quality is amazing with an interesting plot. Thank you so much author! By far one of the best I'veread on this app[img=recommend]

If you want to get away from typical Fl stories of revenge and love and reborn etcetc . This book is just right for you . For me this novel was refreshing...especially the great sibling love and support shown throughout the story . The way Emily fight with her demons. The support of her brothers . It really give you a glimpse of reality of those ppl who suffer from trauma...her insecurity , her doubts, her fear , everything. well everything about this novel is amazing ...and I wish luck for author to do her best ❤❤