This was absolutely amazing and I loved reading it, it has to be one of my absolute favourite reads for fan fictions, I really hope you continue it Iβd love to see how wormtail gets his just dessert and would be interested on how things with Nacissa evolve
Pls don't drop this it is a great and I mean a very fantastic read pls keep making chapters for I think I've found I book I actually would love to see have an ending
I think your story is really good hopefully you update I don't know if you're going to continue to update or not I wanted to say if you go to my thing where it shows like the word the circle thing is with people of commented or something you know like where you want to go usually you can click to that to go to someone's page I have a lot of fanfiction that you might be interested in don't know if you like to read other FanFiction on here if not anyone that goes to my little thing we'll see that I have what I'm reading and what's in my reading list and how you might find something in there that you don't have on your reading list so that's my hope
its better than other ff found on this app which are new.
in terms of character development though mc having trouble controlling his temper due to his magic is kinda disappointing, I hope he learns to keep under control in later part of story.
Most certainly quite a interesting and intriguing book that has caught my attention got me hooked on reading it even more especially with the MC being the lost son/their of The House Of Black not to mention all the different changes he has done as well his distrust of Dumbledore and what he done to The Malfoy Family look forward to reading more of this book quite intrigued by what will happen next especially during the trial of Peter Pettigrew not to mention overall this book has been quite interesting and intriguing in every way that I can't wait until ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Uma otima historia... perfeita em tudo .... tem alguns errinho aqui e ali mas blz.... mas oq realmente importa e que a historia tem um ENORME POTENCIAL então por favor poderia continuar a historia.... e eu olhei suas atividades no webnovel e sr.Autor(a) ainda esta ativo... entao por favor continue a historia ... e caso nao for continuar porfavor fale nao gosto de alimentar falsas esperanças
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This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction i ever read.. can't wait to see next chapter (it's already 1 year.. please update soon author) πππππππ
Itβs really a good work, with a great background and rationaly well planned. I love it. I hope author will post soon to give us good surprise. Thanks for this work. π€π»π₯°
This is a great story and I couldnβt put it down. I need more. Please update soon. It was fresh and I need a happy ending for Sirius, Harry and Magnus.
Writing quality is acceptable.
Plot is chiched and a lot of information is dumped from the first chapter itself, making it a pain to read and remember.
A nice attempt.
I need more of this.
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Excelente historia la cuenta de una manera que llama mucho la atenciΓ³n de los lectores Me gustΓ³ muchΓsimo espero que el escritor siga este historia porque tiene un contexto diferente a las demΓ‘s historias que he leΓdo 5 estrellas sigue adelante
Honestly one of the best novels I've read in quite a while..................................................................................................................
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Story is great and I am excited to read more but I dont know if this story will be continued???? After months of hiatus there was a chapter 3weeks ago soooo maybe it will?? Idk but lets hope it does lol
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A good HP fic. Any Dumpledore bashing is good bashing. The character is good, and I like how the story is developing. It breaks canon pretty well. I just wish that updates were faster. I read this story on FF, not Webnovel, but it deserves to be read.
I usually dont like making reviews but this one of the best books ive read in a while and hope the author updates more often. I also love the fact he makes the chaps long, def awsome since most chapters in books are short!!!! You have my full support on this book dear author!!!
Its a good book, the mc is smart and the grammar is decent if you are a supporter of dumbledore though then this isnt for you as dumbledore is evil. The only really bad thing i have to say on this book is the character development the author only focuses on a few main characters so the other characters just seem really shallow without personality.
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