Reviews of The Origin (MultiVerse Fanfic)

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4.7

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SystemGO
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VirtuelGentleman
Amazing fanfic! absolutly hope this gets picked up again! absolutely loved the read, thank you for the masterpiece. Please continue writing πŸ˜”πŸ˜”
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berik_borantaev
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Escultor
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
2mth
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salamander0
are you going to drop this book . .
2mth
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THEBE
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2mth
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Negiharem
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2mth
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TippierHalo
Keep going Author πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Šβ˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈπŸ˜„β˜ΊοΈ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2mth
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Big_dady_coming
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
2mth
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Ki_4682
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2mth
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acedia
The author is a genius. Doesn't let the other girls miss out. The clone does not do penetration but does do devouring. It just makes me cringe at how MC's cuck themselves. This allows for equal treatment. You're a genius.
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2mth
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FAP_Master_
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2mth
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Thigh_Master
This fan fic is so good take likesπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
3mth
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jonathan_galael
what i can say is...well done dude i like ur story and plot and some twisted event especially rito and saruyama. What i can say, beside good job and hope u can post more chapter and hope after to love ru u go to the other world which more action i guess i mean like shonen world like naruto or one piece since a lot of pokemon there...hahahahaha BTW good job and i hope more chapter to come cioa
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big_bobs_mom
I think you should temporarily remove the genre and for parental controls for the Power Stone to appear again[img=recommend] Keep the spirit I like it[img=recommend] Keep the spirit I like it[img=recommend]
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Dimas_Fadhluh
keep the good work author!!!!!!. I liked the story so far!!!! πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ
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3mth
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FAP_Master_
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3mth
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Yagami66
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3mth
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JohnDeuz
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3mth
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Dfrans
I change my mind . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Poseidon_God
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews.
3mth
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jeanpierregerardo
interesing. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
3mth
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Roloter
I haven't read it yet and I just have one question for the author or any readers, is the mc a simp, or like does he become whipped, cause if he does I don't wanna waste my time on this
3mth
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LordKram
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3mth
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WrathOfReed
Amazing fanfic. I like the MC attitude and personality. I also enjoy the interactions with the characters! Also the author of this fanfic is very funny (the author notes between paragraphs make me lmao🀣🀣) Enjoying the worlds so far cant wait to see which world the author chooses next!
3mth
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Rifa_Jati
ok this is my review. Writing Quality 5/5: although there are still mistakes but for me it is enough to understand. Story Development 5/5: I love the story development in every world that MC visits. although there are still a few that are odd but still good (for me). Character Design 4/5: I have commented where Mc touched his woman in public but I was wrong. I read back from the beginning and I just realized it was not the groping part. But the kissing where the Mc kissing the dragon girls in front his Guardian Flore for no other reason than the pleasure of kissing ( in the top chapter there is a scenes where Mc kisses in front of his friend but in this scenes Mc has a reason ). other than that the basics of Mc character are good. Updating Stability 5/5 : Everyday Update of course it 5. World Background 5/5 : For now there is no problem, I like the author's thoughts for WB. Ok that it. Thank for you work author. I enjoy your work. I hope you are still passionate about making this work better πŸ˜†πŸ‘. Sorry if there is a wrong word that i wrote.
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FAP_Master_
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3mth
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Silver_Nightmare
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3mth
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ThelazyFox
Isang chapter palang Meron na agad Malibog yata yung author na to hahaha and the story is very good I hope the author Notice this notice me senpai (Gubbersh)hsjdhdhfbfbfbjfjfjfjfjfjdjzndbdjdndndnncjcjcjfjfbrbdndnfjciic
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The_Lazy_Writer
Quite regular the truth, the writing is a bit loose. MC acts as a babysitter. Good luck.
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