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Eazy_Hard
To all readers, I would like to apologize for not updating the rest of this story for the last few days due to the health problems I am currently facing. But lately, I've been feeling better, so maybe two or three days from now I'll start to continue the story again. Again, I want to apologize.
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Anony_Mous_1902
The story line is just perfect and the writing is very good
It's hard to believe it's someone whose first language is not English that wrote it...
I love itππππ
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Alimatabike_Shittu
Very interesting can not wait to see the family reunion and how they'll react with each other.The revenge of the stockom and how they deal with all their enemies or will they give up and live a normal life. What will happen to Dita and her family are they all died? What about David son's girlfriend will the parent still get back at them. Will David return to be the Mafia king or his son,so many things we want to read just keep on updating
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Mk121
The concept and writing is great, but the way the story progresses isnt my favorite. It moves a bit fast to where the readers cant really connect with the characters as well as id like
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Kim_Miso_21
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Tokunbo_Agoro
Oh my gosh...this has been an interesting book to discover...at first I did not think that it would be interesting at all but I have not been able to put it down yet...π€ The thuggish girls have me definitely worried with their antics and I think their ordeals were very horrible to imagine but did they have to go after the male lead...granted he was wrong to hurt Cathy but did she have to come back and ruin the romantic moments?π€π€π€
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lazylyn
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BiciBicio
Keep it up and have a nice day the way you describe how things feel is beyond my knowledge along with how you still find a way to keep the book so interesting is amazing. Good job
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laraib_majid
I am very glad that finally found something.....ummm. I know I won't regret choosing this book to spend my time.[img=recommend] I was not into mafia type novels but this one managed to find the way to my heart.
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NickyPbb
You can never go wrong with a mafia storyline throw in a an innocent beautiful unique lady and you have a winner - the story is intriguing and the plot catches your attention- I will recommend to read
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holang_qayah
The most epic romance story that contains a lot of action scene, like, A LOT! So exciting, a really worth reading material, and really addictive. Great work!
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Van_Theglang86
this story really makes me addicted to reading it Like the characters and also the plot two thumbs up for you thor.
good job.
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maiddict
It is such a dark story, yet fascinating! worth to read!!! add to your library ASAP!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Nayya_Phrustazies
This story is very interesting and recommended to read.
Keep enthusiasm for the author in writing this story.....
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silvaaresta
first time reading I was just curious, but after seeing the next chapter! I really like this story !!! Wow the story is very good !!
I'm waiting for the rest of the story! β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Dwi_Setya23
the story is good, interesting ... waiting for the continuation, spirit of updating !![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Gldseya
This novel has an exciting storyline and a good plot, packed with dense action scenesβrecommendations to read!
Keep spirit to continues the story, thor!
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julietasyakur
I have recommendation this novel from my cousin , he say this novel good to read when you have a free time. And then finally I find this novel and enjoyed reading chapter by chapter . Keep spirit Author π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°
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PrincesAuntum
this is the best story ever! you must reading this story, guys! π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°
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syafiuni
Oh My...π― I'm so excited finding this novel. This damn good novel will be my next favorite book. Keep writing and do your best Author, I'll always wait for the next chapter.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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BuSan_BudiSans
Bam bam bam bam!!! I really love this story!!! A lot of gun fire, unlike any other romance story out there, this is really thrilling and boosting my adrenaline! Just like I playing PUBG, and teaming with a beautiful girl because the main female character is described as a beautiful-innocent women, or girl, whatever. Know what, I freankin' love this story af!!!!!
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DodiSiBanteng
So addictive. This is an amazing story that everyone shouldn't sleep on, such a good reading material. Good job for the Author, keep it up! And yeah, I hope u can post another chapters because I really appreciate it if u really do hahahahahahahaha
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odading_manggarox
I really envy the main character. He had all of the men in this whole universe desires about. He is rich, a good fighter, mastering guns especially sniper rifle-type, and he met such an innocent angel like Angeline. Bro, please accept my proposal, I wanna be ur student!!!
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Andifanyy
Romance ... Action ... Bertayal ... The sweetness ... Oh c'mon, this is too good! How can a book be this good? This is definitely easily be my top 10 books, really luv it tho~
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itsmeLeena
I feel like I'm being absorbed into this book. The plot is really great yet addictive. I can't really wait for the next chapters, hope the author make it as fast as posible, 'cause I really felt in love with this book!
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MarinaUVwhite
This story is soooooo good! The way the Author describing about the character made me chills. The plot is really nice. I absolutely recommended this story!
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