Chapter comments on the chapter Ch. 25 Twelve People pt.1 of the book Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Dude i know that you have been charmed by the Muglle born Conspiracy FF but come on

feel like i read some of this in the one harry potter fan fiction about muggle conspiracy or something.

I knew I read this before, Muggleborn Conspiracy is the origin of much of this story. I can see the alterations and how the story differs but it's really not enough to merit the credit. This is kinda insulting to have posted on this site without giving credit to Muggleborn Conspiracy's author in the Synopsis because this author definitely took a lot of that story's content and just altered it to his own ends. It's not even taking inspiration anymore.

Everyone seems to forget that witches and wizards have double the life span of muggles so in-turn age much slower. Someone who is in their 60's for example should looked to be only in there 30's-40's depending on their own genetics and magical ability. It is why it also confuses me why so many of them get married and have children so early. If everyone remembers it is stated that James Potters parents were considered very old when they had him.

I hate how this is written MC gives out free candy to everyone, wastes a lot of money, does a lot of stupid things, and I have read this before For starters, how long did he continue selling phoenix tears? How much money does he have and how much does the average john doe make a month? The way these few chapters about firm, holster and geri are written also majorly sucks imo... Then there is the issue of his magic. You can't just state repeatedly and in an important fashion that he can absorb magic and never follow up on it, nor his reserves or anything. Does wandless magic take more magic or just more focus or what is the difference to wanded magic. You can't expect readers to tqke these and other things from other fanfictions without explanation, since plenty sure af isn't in canon or works different there than shown here Still, overall not bad to read, but I hope it gets better later, since more will be established...

Quite similar to muggle born conspiracy fanfic but I guess this path is the most optimal and logical path for improvement for that world.

I thank you for the chapter

I was really liking this fic but I’m afraid I’ll have to stop reading it. I have a limit to how much power fanticy I can tolerate.

I thank you for the chapter.

Great chapter.

It looks very fragile, even Hogwarts has been invaded i imagine the dark lord sneezing and everything falling down how are the current things are

hmm

"Ha Ha Ha" :) I to love a good book though i am only ten I am glad you took some time of to rest your mind and do something you love[img=recommend]

Thanks for the chapter!!

Quite hypocrite actually he’s been picking out the unfortunate ones as his allies

thanks for the chapter! keep up the amazing work

boooring boooooring booooooooooooooooring booooooooooooooooooooring. what are you doing to this novel? What is this boring political shit/business shit? Rise of the businessman. f off

Tks

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Fuck this "shall" word 😫