Chapter comments on the chapter Ch. 176 Time to play hardball of the book Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

A timeskip..

I like seeing the plans but damn it is frustrating to read a chapter and not advancing in the story XD

... so this was an Entire rant chapter. Have you not heard show don’t tell? I honestly don’t get what youre trying to do here. You basically just explained your story outline So are you gonna now show us it or Is the mention time skip gonna jump to after the fact? Which is a weird narrative choice which impiles youre trying to make your story end sooner. This is bad writing, like legitimately bad.

Thanks again for another awesome chapter and great as always i love the story so much i can't even describe it please keep it up and stay healthy

Holy ......what a waste of chapter. This novel is really going down the drain with the over top obvious chapter filling. No proper plot for the past 20-50 chapters or so it feels. It's not even slice of life, its just...... For example, this entire chapter was: oh yeaaa, lol, its going to be epic, I am going to do this, and this, and I'll do this and that. yeaaa, it will be good........ Why not spare the useless empty chapters and just write what he will be doing, there have been more than a few similar chapters. This is something I noticed for many chapters, its a lot of nothing about how something will happen.

like this story, but I really didn't want to read a chapter about what he hasn't done yet

Awesome story, but instead of plans, I think we were expecting the real actions here.

You’re not writing a story, you’re explaining your outline for the story thru your protagonists point of view.

AHHH THANK YOU, just finished my presentation for history and can now enjoy this nice chaoter before sleep❤❤

I cannot wait for the next chapter where shi* hits the enchanted broom then gets smeared everywhere by stupi* wizards. Thanks for the update 👍

Thanks for the update 🙂 .New government is needed.

I'm saddened that their is so far no photo of all his higher ups with him at head of the table

It’s been heavily hinted that Fudge had a hand in the downfall of the line of house Bones. From the first meeting where he went into a mental malfunction and the subsequent one where he was clearly in fear of something… and later when he all but admitted Aeden would be a hindrance ‘just like his father’, it can be seen that his filthy hands had extended into that mess and it seems clear that his end should not be so lackadaisical as to allow him to step down from office. ⬇️ Picture of Cornelius Fudge ⬇️

if only the uk did this now

""""""""""Supposed to do.""""""""""" Indeed.

isso e muito legal, o MC esta se mostrando um verdadeiro Imperador nas sombras kkkkk.

you should almost have someone investigate and publish a book about all the things the White Lord Bones did as a child for an epilogue and have everyone realise how his mafia family started

Magical Spas, who came up with that? It's awesome.

0-0 Looking forward to the next installment!

Merci pour le chapitre !