the first few chapters of a novel set the pace really, like many other fighting novels if power scaling doesn't matter and anything can kill anything then the fights dont matter and so too does your trash "fighting" story, killing something with a rake just shows.
I have read this only once so I can't say much. However, I greatly recommend this for people to read. It's a very fast paced story with, a lot, lot of thing going on. - At the start, it might seems somewhat slow. But rest assured that it would most likely surprise you at how fast Meng Lei grow stronger. -The World design is also very detailed, with a lot of explanation in regard to things. Of course, it's not as though it'll tell you the secret to the Elements of Law of Nature, Power of Origin, Time, Life, Death, Destruction and Space. Nor would it tell you detailed explanation of things like Law of Order, Destiny and Space-Time. -But it's enough to get you intrigued. Of course, there is also the matter of our Mc himself. I will only say this, he is very keen in moving forward and didn't really like conflict, but if it come down to it, would certainly cut those conflict down to its very core.
For me it was good until chapter 50, then I dropped it, I didn't like the MC bullying others just because he was stronger, and he's so arrogant.
Example : He went to another academy and blackmailed many young nobles as if there was no one in the world who could stop or punish him.
Lots of cliches, (childhood female friend / fatty rich friend / getting loot and bloodlines that are needed in the next chapter / friend who gets bullied / bandits has exactly what he wanted /annual events happen the moment he enters the new area)
I loved the book honestly I wish you would continue the book it had a lot of good pros there is a couple things you could work on but over all good I think if you read books and like spread out a bit and came back it would be good
Well the novel was good and I was able to finished it all. The ending of the novel was so annoying like too many plots has yet to be answered. Like his subordinates, reviving the Time God, and even the mystery behind the system. Welp, I guess will leave it with our imagination. So far I enjoyed reading it.
A very good novel. I very much enjoyed reading this novel since the plot was good all the way till the end. The grammar didn't have any problems from what I could see, which is something I consider a must when reading...
All in all, highly recommended to anyone who likes this gender.
The author has to gain more experience in writing. It's juvenile. Everything seems long-winded. Many plot holes, mc is dumb, many clichés cause of lacking creativity. He adds his own ideas to a poorly written cliché story. If you are a new reader you can read it.
I have never read a novel without skipping a small sum of it, However this is the only novel I read through and through and enjoyed every part of it (and I’ve read Reverend Insanity) this is an amazing novel
Really liked the story line of this book. Made me laugh out loud several times. It is over the top as the MC is always overpowered but it makes it fun and light hearted instead of serious which is what you want from a fiction book. Only complaint is some spelling/grammatical errors throughout the entire book. But they are easy to get over so long as you don't let them distract you from the overall book.
A great novel, one of the best system novels that i have read so far. MC is till crazy where his nose will go to heaven, but also have the ability to back it up. Fast phase novel with no hang ups, never took break while reading it. Good novel for new readers
This story is great and the idea is great, the only thing is that he becomes too overpowered in the end too quickly. Also the plot armor was way too much it was ok in the beginning but he somehow was too powerful for everyone and got the exact right things every single time.
Well all i can is that its okayish. If you ddont ave anything to read, read this and pass some time. The Author writing is quite immature showing his inexperience.
Novel is full of Cliché and they are not well written cliché. MC has a multiple personality disorder. One time he acts like 15yo next time all matured and grown up.
Except the world background and update stability nothing is worth noticing in this novel. P.S. MC has smoll brain.
The is a fast speed op Mc. No romance in this one. MC talk a lot while battling, telling his trump cards before he kill his opponents like he is waiting for others to praise him. Sometime they avoid his trump card after he explain before he kill them and he is surprised. What an idiot mc. Most mc enemies are stupid. They are just there for him to slaughter so he can earn points for his system. If you can over come this, then it’ a fun read.
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Overall it was a fun novel that didnt go on forever and ever for over 1k chapters of power leveling until it was just rinse and repeat. This wasnt an Omg novel for me, but a decent time killer worth a read, if youre bored and dont mind reading about the standard OP MC dreamed up by an adult living a kids fantasy *nothing wrong with that by the way 😂
felt like the power system/some plot points were copied from coiling dragon with a system for power boost. Then towards the end it had elements of swallowed star. there were plenty of inconsistencies in personality and author needs to find synonyms for knave because it felt like it was used multiple times in every chapter after the halway point. it felt like this book has the potential to be a fearsome drinking game 😅.
So they begging starts off bad but if you keep on reading it hooks you and also it gets even BETTER. Keep on reading trust me hopefully the book get an add on or a 2nd book for it leaves you on a good ending hook.
Don't waste your time with this pointless story full of cliche's and lack of originality. But of course if you like such novels where the intelligence of the MC has to be low for the story to "progress", feel free to read.
The is average, which is to say better than 95% of what you will find in this site. Very much reminiscent of coiling dragon
Standard story with MC waking up in different world with a system.
The good stuff first : the MC is not stupid. He doesn't have much of a personality but he is also not doing dumb things because of a hero complex.
Also the system. Great implementation of the concept. It's only a tool that increases stats. No quest windows. No dimensional shops. No guiding voice. The system is a system, not a character.
Now the dad : The MC doesn't invent anything new. It's the kind of story where he follows an inheritance from one person and when it reaches to limit he moves on to the next higher level inheritance.
Also the system. At the beginning he spends some time cultivating on his own. Increasing his stats just like any other person. But at some point the author just decided that doing it the conventional way is for loosers, and had the MC just buy all the stats he needed to reach higher levels.
Also major negative. The peanut gallery is just annoying.
The amount of time spent on how it's impressive that he is only 16 years old is fricking absurd.
I know that authors are paid by the world count , but like there are numbers other than 16. 17 being one of them. Just have him age a year!!!!
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