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THe Translation didNt come out quite right. And soMe times it Felt like the story just SKipped a beat or decided we Had to know something really important but bot That bad.
I kinda want to read a novel now where the MC does not give 2 sh*ts about his parents who mysteriously disappeared.
And as our MC never set out on his journey, the villans won and ruled the universe.
And due to the fact that MCs usually live in the noob village in the noob region of the noob country on the noob continent of the noob world, nobody cared to rule over this random backwater planet. And MC lived happily ever after.
(I mainly gave this novel 1 star because I am tired of MC searching for his parents. Those who like standard tropes will probably like this novel)
I was kinda enjoying the novel when Wutian—the Protagonist—was living in the woods, nursing a desire for revenge and having fun with Little Tian, his slimy faux toad. Bringing the little girl into the story was a mistake. Bringing her along was a mistake. The MC's total inability to keep a low profile has began to be a big drag…Still, I will continue to read on for at least a while longer—to see how things turn out...
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Title: Heavenly Lord Asura(修罗天尊)
Status: Completed(2296 chapters)
Summary(perhaps spoiler):
Classic cultivation story where the MC is 'destined to be unordinary'. The setting this time seems to be related to his missing parents. There also seems to be some prophetic abilities involved. The writing quality is not bad and you'll probably like the story if your a fan of standard cultivation stories.
generic brainless crap written by 14yo.
Do not waste ur time on this shit.
So badddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.
I don't like the story progress. MC is making a few mistake that shouldn't be made I guess author want to kill off his grandfather to make "revenge as a goal to make MC hunger for stregth" it is so lamp. He meet a girl live a lone inside a forest really? what the point of meeting her since no romantic could happen or anything related to MC. If it is a slice of life novel I don't mind it but it is a cultivation novel.
A boring story like most old Chinese book(10+ years) , a protagonist with plot armor and nothing else.
I really wonder how this story has been selected?
I think some corruption is present in webnovel.
Trash Novel!!! How can the author mess up in the first 10 chapter. The story is full of holes and to fill those gaps the author created more ambiguities.
useless novel
cliche like many others past few weeks I've been getting all crap novels can you just start putting the older books up again that didn't get accepted rathe then these books full of cliche
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
I didn't even read this but i come here to ask how adopting a super pet make you into a asura... Spoiler is also welcomed i just wan to know how will his development start and if it will be connected to his pet.
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