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writing was good but some words are missing and some were wrong so write carfully.
story development was really good feels like a fantasy and thriller would like to read more. characters are great too.
I will rate stability after some more chapters and work on world background because I can't imagine where they are could be big ben could be tokyo so I don't know.
I see lots of potential in this story is hope this story becomes great by every chapter. I am hyped for this story. It's funny mysterious as well as scary
The idea is great. Charecter are introduced in a very interesting way. The main charecter is relatable and the quality of writing is good
It will be an interesting story
The concept of the story is really great. The way story start is funny. I can totally relate to the main character
I can't wait to see what happens next
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