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Saeven07
Author here! I just found out that I can review my own book lol so here's a shameless review! This is a fun book to read, I know because I have fun writing it. And though it may not be perfect yet (as nothing is or will ever be), I hope you give this book a chance. I love theatre and Broadway so much that I just thought "what if...?" and I think that in itself is interesting. To those who are supporting it, thank you very much! I really appreciate it. That's all, All the love xx Jan
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YawningBrain
I had to say that it is totally worth reading. I am just hooked with the plot and the characters. It is a refreshing story, very captivating to read. I seriously like the Main Character, her background, her inner thoughts, and struggles within her new group of special friends and the ML. The flow of the story has a good pace and the narrative and descriptions are fascinating, I was seriously loving many paragraphs. And last but not least, Congratulations on WFP #11, definitely worthy. Keep on the good work author! I can't wait for more releases.[img=recommend]
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Daisy_T
5 STARS!! ⭐✨ This is gold, a treasure, an amazing treasure. Definitely worthy of winning WFP #11. The story right from the very beginning draws you into the MC's world and lets you know exactly how she's feeling. How she's torn between obligation and finding her true self. I love how the descriptions are so unique and explicit. The comedy is goldπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. I totally love Evelina thoughπŸ’œ, as wicked as she's supposed to be she has wayy too many good sides to her. And West....sigh my heartπŸ˜ͺπŸ’œ. I'll leave it at that but seriously this is a MUST HAVE. Add it to your library and love #WESTLINA with me, pretty please.....πŸ’œβœ¨
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Brian_Hanes_117
The writing quality is good. Just a few punctuation points missing. The story is amazing and I don't even read stories like this. Like vampires and occult stuff is not my kind of stuff. So I'm just going off the quality of the story. The story development is solid. The use of updates seems good as well. There are several humorous scenes throughout the story as well. Action scenes are interesting. World Background seems solid, but I always want to see more authors describe the environments that the characters are in. But the description and background are great in the sense that I know what is happening throughout the story.
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Burlesque_Dancer
I really love this book. It's so good. It's written so well and the style is so cool. I love the development of every aspect of this. It's also a unique plot
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swatiikakkr
a completely worth reading story line,makes u completely hooked up to itself.....nicely described characters. ...a vry good work by author so far
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Cindy_Daschel
This book is a fun read and a hoot to boot! I wish I could read it all day straight. I can't wait every night to read it. Don't worry. I won't give anything away.
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Pacesetter
What a refreshing story to read. Thanks author for creating a story that isn't just about story telling but also gives vivid details and explained interestingly to keep the readers waiting for more, with the emotions of the female lead.
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Burlesque_Dancer
best book! it's awesomely written. I'm addicted to the characters and their story. I have no idea what's gonna happen and how the impossible love is going to unfold but I'm excited.
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SolAce
What else can go wrong with a troupe, whose members happened to shame you for a first meeting ? Oh, not being the only inhuman race there... I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed reading this. Not only was it a blast but also a pure gem with long chapters that will satisfy any cravings. Literally almost perfect grammar with even the ones I spot being so minor I almost skipped it. xD The characters have their own personality, which hands down, I so wish to meet in real life. Imagine meeting a man like West. Dreamy~ All in all, I am singing praises for this novel. A welcome addition to my ever growing library. Keep up the good work, Author !
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Sphynx_99
I... I have no words. I really like this story. It has humor, action, and a dash of romance. The characters are well thought out, the conversations between them are smooth, and each character has their own voice (they don't all talk the same). All in all, it's a yes from me!
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Thereviewer48
Writing Qaulity: 3/5 There were mistakes and weird wording that caused me to be confused on a few paragraphs that I had to reread them. Updated Stability: 5/5 I give that to everyone. Story Development: 4/5 Pacing is good, although some scenes had me lost (or that could just be me). Character Design: 5/5 Your characters are well-written, I like their personalities. World Background: 4/5 Good and descriptive. You let people know what to expect in the story whole your first chapter got them interested.
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inflict
Good story development and characterization... Nice plot also! I added this to my library to see its progress... If you are the type of person who will check the review section first, i reco this to read.
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Noleafyet
A hidden goodie! Thank you for this awesome cookie Saeven. Gonna binge again once more chapters are within the crosshairs. Please keep it up! May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, and even earn more^^.
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whiteribbon27
This book is a must read! For everyone who loves Vampires, and mythical creatures this is the book you are looking for! I hope the author updates more, I'm cheering you on!
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Lizabelle88
Interesting read! Evelina is a vampire that was carrying a heavy responsibility on her shoulder. She met witches along the way to her mission. I'm curious if she will succeed or not? A compelling read, captivating and well written! Good job Author! Keep it up!
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Dare43564
The story is intriguing and you are quite the master of word play. I appreciate how you have quite the depth of description and understanding of the world you created.
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TheElisse
I have really loved reading your book. The main character is great. I have really like the way she thought and brought us into her world. The book is amazing and I am looking forward to new chapters
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bibiyenini
Love the synopsis from the get-go since it involves witches and vampires! I am not really into fantasy but I like how you wrote it, not to mention you won the WFP#11!
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KristineElias
It has a good plot, characters were described well and the world background was also well written. But, there are more sentences that needs comma. It is very important for readers to know when and where to pause, how a sentence is read and it also lets the reader know the feeling of what the characters were saying. All of the above are normal mistakes that could be corrected after a second or third read. Always try to reread your chapter before uploading it. It is a good story. Good luck author!
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TacoKun
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this shit. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this shit. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
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Littlepunnie
Over all Author-sama your work is at its finest. Words used, character designs, the development of the story is also good. I hope you will not forget me when you become a contracted author( are you already a contracted one?) Please update more chapters.
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Aella_Stormwind
I am absolutely loving this story so far! The characters are three dimensional and really well fleshed out. The pacing of the story goes along smoothly, and the scenes flow nicely. The descriptions are vivid and visceral. I really feel for the characters, especially Evelina. Looking forward to seeing what comes next from this author, great job! Would highly recommend to anyone looking for an intriguing read.
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Nicolas_Cavalieri
Well, usually I prefer to stay far away from vampire stories. But this, my friend.... This was a very good one! Although I think the flow is interrupted uncesseraily sometimes, the pace is very good and the story is very captivating. I reaaaallly like this more political/war setting and is aligned very much indeed with my love for geopolitcs. Nice one, hope you keep posting!
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fromawriter
The story is good and it is well written. I'm sure anyone who likes vampire stories will definitly like reading this. I think the story plot is very interesting. I hope you can continue on with the story and keep writing. I'm sure you will get more reviews.
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Onyourhead
Off the top of my head the first thing I thought when I began reading was that the Synopsis and perhaps the book cover does do the story itself justice! In fact the story itself is wonderful the world background is very different and is applied well to the story as in that it’s very well described. In fact all of what’s written, is written perfectly well. No problems with spelling or grammar. Though I’ve read this type of novel before, it hasn’t been for a while. Let’s say it’s no wonder you got gold! I think you’ve made your fantasy world and all of its laws very interesting and thankfully not stereotypical. I just hope you continue to post more chapters because your novel is really fantastic!
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moonmato
Interesting plot and characterization!! This book is going to be one of my faves πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί I love how you describe each acts, it's admirable. Keep up the good work, bub!
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