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Brian_Hanes_117
Excellent story overall. The writing is great with few errors. The plot is interesting. The characters are interesting as well. The one thing I would advise is to put a bit more description into how the characters look and the background. Just a little more. I'm excited to see what happens next and can't wait until you finish it.
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AtaiMuratbekov
Captivating story, with a nice pacing and flow. I like main character and her motivation. And it is an amazing job you have done with all these detailed descriptions. I personally think, that doing research makes chapters more vivid and realistic. Bravo! Keep it up! This story will rock, i bet!
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Kikiyobear
Your book is frankly amazing. Good writing and pacing. I've got to ask the initial chapters are in 2nd or 3rd person P.O.V? I plan on reading more soon but I've got to get back to writing. Write more and hopefully I'll review soon.
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Nr_Yet1208
a pretty good story. both the writing quality and the pacing was decent. the plot was interesting and I think it has a lot of potential. give it a shot.
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hansora
What I understood first is the fact that two friends who are slowly diving into a romantic relationship I love the dynamic between the FL and the ML. The writing is neat which I appreciate a lot because messy writing would distract my focus Keep it up!
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_Ana_16_
I don't usually read slow burns type of books but i must say this book is totally worth it!! everything is awesome, the plot, the storyline, the characters everything! This book gives off a unique vibe and is freaking amazing!
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Hiwaga
This amazing book deserves a five star, the title and the book cover is SUPERB AND AS WELL THE INSIDE OF THIS NOVEL! The scenes are well written and as well the characters. This is an awesome novel and people are gonna enjoy reading this masterpiece and SO AM I! Adding this to my library!!!!
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Princess_G_Enigwe
This is touchy . I love books like that. And you used your name which I admire. Apart from that your synopsis is perfect and eye catching. Keep it up. it's already in my library.
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catvi
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catvi

Sometimes in life, it's the small things that matters. This is the message of the story. Yet sometimes in life, the world will try to fk you up for wanting small things. This is another truth the novel shows you. As a concept it is nothing new, but the execution is interesting. And love the name, Jo. It actually fking makes sense in this story.
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kenshilove
I love the flow of the story and it makes happy. Excited for upcoming chapters. The story Development is good but the character design is not truly good but in the form of world background it makes sense.
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Mavier
This is a well-written book among the new books. It has an interesting plot, I love the characters and this is one of the books that make you want to binge read it at one go. keep going author.
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Madym
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Fantastic Book! The story seems fun, I enjoyed this one as well as quite taken with this story, it is relaxing, easy to read, understand, and the pacing is also good. The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way the writer has written this story. It has a lot of potential. Just one request, the author should update this more and more. In the end, I'll ask everyone to try this, the author has really done great work.
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Aisha_Jin
This story is quite interesting but I will advice you to change the cover page with a coolest one to make it more cool. However, sounds different and plot is quite good. Keep it up!
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cBLaISrLIFEma
Nice plot! And the writing is so awesome! It's too detailed and imaginary, is that the right word? The characters is good! Overall it's freakin good!!
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Megana4
So far the story is interesting and loves the flow of the story. Very promising characters. The writing style is remarkable. This book has great potential to reach great heights. Highly recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
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HelenBold
A very entertaining book! The idea of a bet may seem ordinary and superficial. But what if you can win if you lose and win if you fail? As you go into the story, you will be torn apart. You wish they lose the bet, so they end up together, but at the same time, you want their story to evolve naturally regardless of the bet.
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Sailow_Sanchez
Be honest, don't you get annoyed by the annoying cliche reviews. 'great story' 'amazing characters' bwaaaah. Those suck for me. Any who, [img=update]. I like your story so you get a vote. if I could gift you I could, but I'll keep reading and I'll you can expect a gift from me. Fan's should let consistent voting do the reviewing[img=recommend] P.S. I'm in love with your characters.
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goldenchild725
The characters are adorable. Both Jo and Matthew are really cute, and they do seem to act like a couple already. The story development is really good. It's not too slow, but it's not fast either. The writing quality is good. I do feel there can be improvements though. Some of the sentences feel a little awkward when reading. Overall, I do like the story, despite romances not really being my cup of tea.
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Wolfgirl1215
This is a very good read! I love the relationship between the two main characters, very cute, and the way they interact certainly brings a smile to my face. I love how they all have unique personalities and ambitions, as well as tensions with each other. The plot itself I wasnt sure what to expect initially, but its actually very nice, its got a good flow, and is aided by some top quality description. The chapters a not to lengthy, ideal for my personal reading preference, and overall, I would recommend. This one will be staying in my collections for sure. Beautiful work
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Minxs
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Great story. Honestly don't see much you need to improve on. Just keep up the good work. One thing I would mention, just my opinion though, is that having a ton of dialogue detracts from story setting. Everything else looks great!
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Izmi_Gea
GREAT, I was wondering who Jo Jo will pick up or how the author will continue to develop the story, it makes me curious and can not wait for the next chapter as each chapter continue to draw me in[img=recommend]
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Idczhen
Hmm, the storyline is promising and it's worth a try. The author got a creative mind to develop this kind of story but he should update more chapters. I know how hard writing a chapter is but daily update and it will be successful. I speak from experience.
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The_divine_oracle
I like the way the author is showing that there are places where we need to compromise. We cannot always have everything we want. The story is relaxing and easy to relate to. The characters are also really interesting. Keep up the good work.
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basementerz
This story has a nice starting to it and the writing is very neat. The plot is also very interesting. Characters are very good and easy to understand. I hope you'll update frequently. This book is an excellent job. keep up the good work.😊
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Emp1Jj1_5509
Nice story.... The pace is slow but...it doesn't make the novel too boring. The characters were described well.. I don't think...I saw any mistakes in the novel. Keep up the good work 👍
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DyaAran
A modern love story which revolves around a bet! Yes, a bet. Isn't it interesting? The plot is eloquently written. The story is very detailed which I find attractive. Overall, this one is a good read for sure.
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Alex_Itsios
I really enjoyed the story and how the characters are layed out. I wonder how the story will evolve but I'm liking it so far! Keep up the good work! :)
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TofSpades
Amazing novel, extremely underrated! The writing style is great and the world building is second to none. Hats off to the author for the great novel! Keep it up!
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CREATIVE_SPACE
Started with the synopsis now I am glued to it. What a beautiful contemporary novel. Its the best thing I have read in a while. The characters, events and background descriptions are amazing. The writing quality is extremely great. The title itself being unique caught my eyes. The author have done a great work. I would surely put this gem in my library.
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BronzeColt
Well, it's unique to say the least. I was kind of confused in the beginning about the prologue but I understood it as I continued reading. Kind of a cool romance novel with certain differences compared to other romance novels. Keep up the good work.
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