I am the author, and I am proud to say that this novel's now fine! I have finally written something I am satisfied with, I have started to proofread and edit my work; also I need to get this out: FUCK GRAMMERLY! THAT SHIT WAS ABSOLUTE TRASH, IT'S GRAMMER WAS EVEN WORSE THAN A FUCKING 8TH GRADER. Now that I have said that, the update is going to slow down a little, since I am now juggling two novels now. With how easily I get side tracked and how boring writing can get sometimes expect 1-2 chapter a day, with both of them at least being over 1000 words. Also, sometimes I post chapters that are 3000 words long.
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