First of all, I want to give myself a thumbs up for imagining this story and enjoying it! Before I tell you guys my thoughts, I would like to remind everyone that this is a shameless review for my being to receive a five-star review. I created a five-star review before and just deleted it to renew it. I would also like to tell you guys that I will be deleting reviews with bad ratings for no reason. Personal Attacks are not allowed in my story. Second, to the 600 readers out there, thank you for supporting me! This story is rewritten, so you won't be able to find the 40+ chapters anymore! Please criticize me in a good way/reasonable way so I could understand and improve my writing capabilities! I hope you all will enjoy this work of mine and will continue to read my other stories! I love you all!
The novel has a good plot and it appears promising. Author has done an awesome job in depicting the background information about the world. I normally don't read system novels, but this one has caught my attention and I am looking forward for more chapters.
Oh my! The twist of this story is pretty appealing and has the strength of pulling the attention of the reader... The author has started something great. Great.
I am not a big fan of cultivation stories but the attention to detail of the author is beyond amazing. Just the first chapter that gives the details of the powers is sure to keep you turning the pages. An awesome start to an awesome book.
From two chapters, we have an adventure, an awesome connection between the MC, and a nice setup. 10/10, an excellent start to a novel. Can’t wait to see what the characters get up to in the future!
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The consempt of this book is very fasinating and intriguing! I love how the system works and how the author handled everything! I also read the other book explaining this story’s system! It was so knowledgeable and interesting!
Okay, I will say that in the male lead genre, this is the novel I have been curious about. I was wondering how to write this kind of novel, and I stumble upon a treasure
Im going to give this a five star review because it really is going well! I hope It continues and more people will appreciate this! Love lots to author!
The story was really well written, I really enjoyed reading every single chapter. It was one of those books that you can't just stop reading.I truly loved it great job.♡
I love that the author made sure to introduce the characters first as it often makes me confused and curious,not only that the author makes sure to write down their skills and ability,their talents and etc.I haven’t read the whole book due to lack of time but just after reading a few chapters I am liking it!Good luck to the Author,I wish you all the best!
Yes im a girl but this is a great story! I love all the books this author creates And will always support him! Best of luck author! Keep making![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
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hate it and love it! All the emotions i can offer to this story! Keep writing and i will be there to read and correct your story! I love you and hate you author😂[img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]BEST REGARDS TO THE OWNER FOR MAKING THIS KINDA UNIQUE STORY!LOVE IT AND WILL KEEP READING IT! I WILL BE PART OF THOSE WHO WILL SUPPORT YOU TIL THE END!
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[img=update][img=recommend] I ToTally love the story and Would love the author to continue updating😩😭 pleasseeee i neeed more!! Anyways i recommend This to others!
Well, how should I review it? As I already said you're a far more better writer than me but still if I say the plot is interesting and everything near to perfect about this book. Nothing else to say, it's a promising novel.
All the best for upcoming chapters...
I have read the synopsis and trust me it's gonna be quite interesting. I could never be able to write how the author wrote it. The Character is the best one though. I'm so gonna like this book🤘👍
oh wow this book is in so much detail I really like how the author described the character's traits like it was so interesting and I can't wait to read more great job author it was amazing [img=recommend]
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