Omg!!This book is so interesting. The author has portrayed the characters well and I keep wanting to know more and more as I continue reading the book. I look forward to reading more of your books
Every chapter of this novel is consistent and full of wonderful descriptions and it also includes plenty of animals, which is a plus.
I'm not sure if any other readers feel the same way as me but from reading this novel alone, I could picture the settings in India where animals and colours play a huge part.
That's how the author managed to teleport me to another country while reading it at home/work. Well done author, keep it up!!
I can't decide which of the twins I like more :p
The world you've built is both intriguing and believable. The characters are actually very well designed and aren't trope-ridden at all. Kudos!
Having said that, I personally am not a big fan of using scene-headings such as "XXX kingdom," "20 years later," etc. They are more appropriate for scripts. I'm an oldguard who likes them written out like "Meanwhile in XX kingdom," or "20 years have passed since ~" Not saying you should, but it wouldn't hurt to consider the option.
So far, I love your style so much! It's very descriptive and I could picture the scenarios incredibly well! This book is worth a read, keep up the good work bub! 💕💕
Great Story. Nice Plot. Interesting Characters.
Guys read this you will love it and like the twins very much.
All the best and keep up the good work aythor.
Good Nice Beginning...The Background sceneries and people's emotions narrated well.That mom's prettiest feeling while giving birth was explained awesome😍
I have just reading the first chapter but it made me feel bottom of the heart ❣️ and I will complete the whole novel nice narration author😉😉😉😉 nice start 🤟🤟🤟
Hello Everyone. Thanks for everyone who is giving a shot for this book. I am glad to know that you are reading this novel and liking it. Please give your valuable reviews to this story and let me know what are your requirements for this story.
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A very beautifull story. All the characters in the novel are intersting , unique.Emotions ,scenary are beautifully narrated. Female leads are awesome , beautiful and their aura and strengths are very inspiring😍❤️.Good work auth.🙂.We will always support your work.
All the best👍
Really, wonderful experience while reading this book... I like every character in this book😊... Expressing each and every situation is pretty nice and simple, even some times I felt like those scenes are actually passing in front of me in my imagination😊... all the best auth🤗...keep up the work👍 and waiting for more chaps🤩
Great novel I read so far. Interesting characters, amazing places, different creatures....enjoying every moment.superb and all the very best author.....keep rocking.
Really great... looking for more chaps. Guys plz give it a shot. You will love it. The introduction and plot is great. Loved it and enjoying the chap....
All the best author.
It's amazing to see how the story's been narrated. The settings where the story happens are well defined. The Characters are well developed and used. Readers would offer their attention and get engaged if once tried. Looking forward for more exciting chapters!! sett
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