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xSM0K3Yx
I just started reading this story and I really love it π₯Ί the name of the book grabbed my attention quickly. Honestly I'm not very fond of stories that include cheating but this book has genuinely captured me to the point where I keep on coming back to read it. Overall I have very high hopes for this book currently and while it continues to develop I would like to end on this last note I highly recommend you to read this story ayou will not be disappointed. *I'm also secretly hoping the 2 main characters have a happy ending* ππ
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Aysel_Inara
We never like the 2nd woman and the person whom we regard as homewrecker but have you ever heard his/her side of story? NO!
This work specially highlights the story of a passionate lover, a witty and powerful lady who will go through lengths to get back what's hers.
She's in love with ML (who marries another woman) but believe me as far as I can feel it....my hunch is that MLs wife is the villain whereas the FL who appears to be a bad person is actually a victim. And if this is accurate guess then author has successfully created the hype and understanding of the characters. They appear naive but accordingly situation, the development of emotions is wonderful and that's what drives the plotline up to fuller. Don't worry about the quality its highly readable (more than that) and not to forget the smexy cover. β_β
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ednamodee
girl when you gone finish this book i think it should be completed soon cause its dragging
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Adidassss
I'd say Jason is the Best characterπ, I want to Marry Himπ
... i know this novel is so very heartbreaking and stressing.. but i just want to point out...MC is sometimes too much, too harsh ( well ofc other characters as well).. i know she has trauma, heartbreaking past, betrayal love, , but for me it's kinda overdramatic sometimes.. and i suggest only way Valentina to be normally sane (also the other characters) is to have a counselling.. especially she has trauma that can cause her mentality and emotional unstable (I think she's semi-crazy but Rose is worst, she's Crazy and immature)... i think that's the best solution to make their minds less chaotic and problematic... well she's prideful but what's wrong w/ seeking help? it does not make her weak, it would make her strong and brave, and accept her imperfections in a good way.....
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ednamodee
i honestly think xavier will get a redemption arc soon bc they still love each a lotttttt( him and val) and bc heβs definitely the ml
he will divorce that rose girl soon
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floatingtorso2002
Hi author, constructive feedback hereβ¦the story initially was good,but towards ch300+β¦it just keeps dragging and going in circles π₯π₯π₯ where do you want to direct your readers?
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Fernanda_Tinoco
I just love the story line. But I have something to confess, more than 300 chapters is craziness. I wonβt get to the end.
I would love to see the girl solve this mistery and get her revenge!
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bellamie_ranes
I just started reading this novel, and wow! what a work of art! It carefully illustates the 2nd woman's side of her story making you side with her own perspective, unlike many other novels. Relevant language use and characters. I would be lying if I fail to mention that the novel is good. Try it, then tell me if am wrong π. It's liteπ₯π₯π₯π
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Muchiz
The beginning was good and I was anticipating great story development but am disappointed the development is stagnant and too much repetition.
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Anushka_Anu
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3frina
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Deeptinnd
Sorry author to give you my honest reviews. Since the start of the novel I'm trying to understand why can one situation be explained in one chapter rather than repeatedly repeating the word and make no sence. I also want to ask you if you know where the story is going, I just feel it is going in circles and nothing more. I know it is very difficult to write and I'm not discouraging you. But you also have to think as the viewer also. You have great plot, good characters but hanging the story for too long makes it loose interest. You can take help from fellow authors directly or indirectly to make the story more believable. Before you took break, the story was going good but now it feels you have lost your compassion. In no way I mean to hurt you, if it does pls forgive me ππ
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3frina
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Adriti_Singh
It's really very best story .. not boring it's going to intersting day by day ...I want that vel left xiver n be with jeson he is soooo so much better then xevier
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maryf
I was really looking forward to this book as it seemed differnt from the others, but i was disappointed. My review is based on reading about 30 chapters. The characters are really underdeveloped and lack luster. there was nothing interesting about any of them. The ML just dose what his father wants and whine about it, he doesnβt seem to be his own person but he is apparently a good businessman. the FM is emotional and is still trap in the past. she blame others for her actions and seem to lack self respect and esteem. And then there is the hypocritical best friend and greedy wife. I guess thIs was not for me.
Also as much as they are charging for a chapter i expect better grammar.
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theyoungestchild
this novel is basically saying its okay to cheat with someone's husband, it basically take two to tango.
this novel is just immoral in my eyes.it talks about the story of the second woman but why did she become the second woman in someone's marriage.And the husband is just trash.How would you feel if you were the wife who's being cheated on.But some people have their reading preferences,so its not my right to be judgy
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Adriti_Singh
I really love this kind a mysterious story n love ,hate, jealousy , rivalry, everything , is good going in this story writer appreciated for hardwork... β€οΈπππππβΊοΈβΊοΈβΊοΈβΊοΈ
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dongari
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JiangKing
Honestly the story would've been nice if it was written better. The writing quality is deterring me from reading further. I would come back if this story gets a proper editor and flushes out some of the nonsensical/repeated chapters.
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Anna_lytically
Great effort. Nice writing. the the storyline and characters were on point and it's a unique idea in a romantic genre. I really like it. Adding it to my library
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Ashi_Indi
Dear author I appreciate your work and keep working. I already read many reviews and some of them about negative and most of the reviews are positive. So you should happy because many people interest the story and I like your idea. And I know it's really hard to make storyline and working with it because sometimes people may doesn't like your ideas. But actually also there are many positive minds. So keep working and stay safe. Fighting πππππππ
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lazylyn
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kyle_irish
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hardeohla
Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this book!π
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KIM_NGAN_Le
Hate Val, so indecisive. She hurted Jason badly. So hard to keep reading as she continued with her stupidity. Poor Jason!π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯
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Meow_theCat
It's difficult to read because of the dialogue. The grammar is not perfect, some repeativenes, the structure of the dialogue is awkward, and overall the content is childish. I had high expectations from the synopsis that sounded like an different and mature story.
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FnTy_4300
Enjoying the novel so far hope the author doesn't drop it.nice work btw π₯π₯ loving the novel will drop a power stone a day as long as you keep writing
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spier
I initially had some expectation as this is the first novel Iβm reading which focuses on the βsecond womanβ, but Iβve been severely disappointed. The title and synopsis may as well be rewritten at this point because the plot seems to be going in the complete opposite direction. Only the initial 50 chapters correlate with the title and synopsis. After that, itβs like the story has diverged into the budding romance of Valentina and Jason. This is turning out to be no different from any other romantic novel where the girl is cheated on and her lover marries another while she having been heartbroken finds a man who loves her, etc.
The supposed ML lacks any sort of backbone and and was forced into a marriage where heβs simply being used as a puppet and has no real control over his life. The FL who claims to be deeply love the ML and will get him back at all cost has within the span of a week already moved on and looking to start a relationship with another while stating that she wouldnβt go back to the βMLβ. So in what way is this any different from the vast majority of romance novels on this site?
Donβt get me wrong, this type of development is perfectly fine and enjoyable to me, but I just feel like Iβve been scammed of the original reason as to why I started reading this in the first place. The factor that hooked me in was taken away from the equation, so my interest has waned.
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