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Blue_Heart13
I don't know what to write here. So far, this is a great story. Keep up the good work, author. Can't wait to see what happens next.
There are some grammar issues but not so many that it makes reading difficult.
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Isuca
I have no idea what to write here expect maybe I like the novel? Oh well it doesn't matter. It's quite good, you should give it a try. Continue the good work author san.
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rebecca_ringdomsto
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Adit_Dwi_1528
Hi, I like your novel, keep enthusiastic about updating your novel, and also make more detailed words from your novel, that's all my advice, thank you
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Sala7ef_Ninja
Shamelessly giving myself 5*
Some notes about the story <My Nightmare System> :
1- The MC is negative in his thoughts and I'm trying to start with this and getting him improve his character in the process.
2- The world is ours earth just in the near future disaster struck and big change happened. Many worlds intertwined with each other because of the Gallus, and the laws that governed the Earth had changed.
3- The writing style and grammatical errors, I will try to improve.
Please give it a try and point me out for more motivation.
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