Chapter comments on the chapter It's Rewind Time of the book The Legend of Baldur [DROPPED]

Would love to see jean POV as she fixes her home universe. Kinda makes it satisfying to see what all of the effort of the last few chapter has led to. Kinda anti-climactic if all of that build up just ends in "He died lol"

I think Jean deserves a small pov but what I really have been looking foward to is Other Thor and others to react to Baldur.

Just skip apocalypse or write a few short paragraphs about the battle and aftermath of said battle.

Finish the fight with Apocalypse in some paragraphs at most since he's not awake yet anyway and take time to go over Jean's reactions and all that she will do to fix her earth and maybe some talk with the PF too.

I feel you can skip it, a fully bonded Phoenix host can wipe out Apoxalypse without any kind of trouble, especially if he hasn't taken over Xavier yet.

You invested it in 1987 you can steal the deathly hallows as a souvenir or buy a lot of alcohol that is not available in 1100

what happens to his universe now? pls dont keep him stuck in jeans bring jean to his

Given that earlier in this story you stated that Agardians can get divinities either naturally or through doing actions in line with that divinity, how about giving Baldur a (minor?) Time and/or Space divinity?

What a great follow up to the last chapter, even with my misgivings about time travel, everything fell into place nicely, the story moved forward by a ton, and so far no particular inconsistences seems to have emerged. Just perfect! The only thing that could rain on this parade (for me personally mind you) would be meeting another Baldur in the other Universe, but I like to think that our MC is unique, so finger crossed.

btw is he gonna steal apocalypses celestial tech ? that tech is op as shit

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author 😜 A Fantastic Chapter As Always 😉

Dude, that was an awesome chapter. But man, timetravel theories are so Confusing at times tho you did It so well. I almost frowned at the time stone not being used in a different universe when that was what happened in the avengers. But then I realized that they didn’t go to another Universe, but just to a different point in time of the same universe. Noice.

Thanks for the chapter :) Will the MC get a "thank you present" for a job well done from the Lady Phoenix of this Universe ;)

two in one day very nice

POV Jean por favor, e obrigado pelo capítulo incrível Autor-San!!! ❤❤❤ 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Get him to have followeRs that worship him or have the greek gods in this universe since a different one the asgardings might not be there

Well.....................................HE DEAD. That's it. Finito. Done. Ciao. Bye. Move on............... Hahahaha, just kidding, i think seeing Jeans POV would be cool considering all the trouble they went to. It looks like he's stuck in that universe until the time right before he started reversing time when the connection to his mirror was open. So he has to wait centuries or a few years (i wasn't really following the times mentioned on when Apocalypse went to sleep and when Jean and the MC came to her universe) and whatnot before he can go back ig. In the mean time, he can go to their Asgard, or travel their universe as a bounty hunter. That would be interesting.

hahahahaha good chapter i like it :D

excellent chapter