The only critic that I would give is that you seem to have to buy the locked chapters instead of a fast pass. I really love this book and am completely hooked, but I am very much not appreciative that you have to purchase a short story. If it were longer and about only the first two main characters, then yes that would be worth the money, but...just no.
Very well written, great short story. If you love romance, and fantasy then this is for you! ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»
C_Rex