Well story won't be 'so called story' it's new, I won't say best English but good enough that you won't hate it .. I'll try my best to update stable... character design I would try my best... hope you love it
I got to know about this book from the "recommendations section" and what attracted me to the book was it's synopsis! The way FL's brother betrays her for his friend was something new and interesting and I wanted to know more about it.. ππ
The story so far is really good.. Both the ML and FL are fierce but cute personalities! β€οΈ
Somehow this story gave me inspiration seeing a little orphanage do such hard work to get out of the hellish orphanage.. β€οΈπ₯
Also the relationship between the siblings and the ML and FL both is described beautifully β€οΈ
I recommend this book to all those people who love reading about love stories and cute romance ππβ€οΈ
This story is absolutely fantastic!!!!ππ₯
If you like the following points that means this novel is for you~~: ( i may forget some lolπ€)
β’I didn't see a r$pe scene in this story ,so no r$pe.
β’There are no misunderstandings. Well there are, but they will get solved easily. So it's not that much of a problem.
β’mystery. This novel is mysterious. The characters have their own mystery and you have to tie things together.(I think so)
β’the sweetness between the leads is just
.....uwu. I have no words ,but I will tell you there is endless dog food π€.
β’the FL's brothers are really cute and funny .Their sibling relationship is just goals!!
β’the FL is not a weakling. She is strong and smart. She is not the bullied,she is the BULLY.
β’ some of you may hate the ML at first because of the problem at first, but he is absolutely adorable!!! He is cold towards people but gentle to his girl. She will be spoiled rotten by him.
there are a lot of points more, but I just forgot lol.π€§
I highly recommend this novel!! There are some troubles with the grammar ,but hey! Who am I to think so? English is also not my first language and it's hard for people whose first language is not English. But you can understand. It's understandable a that you may not even bother with it (like meΒ°`Β°)
I really love this novel , so I hope it's your cup of tee~~~~ππ
This is such an amazing amazing novel !!! got me hooked with jus the first chapter itself ... the author has done a really really goood work ..the whole background for the story and all the characters are so beautifully written....the main leads have such an adorable chemistry and they r fire tooooo ....and all the friendships and relationships are sooo beautiful ...jus brings a huge smile to my face everytime I read.... i really hope the author doesn't drop the novel i really wanna know how the story ends and wats goin to happen ahead....iim ot ready to leave darling serene and Soham jus yet........
I really love this novel
I like their love story I ve got butterfly in my stomach
I recommend it very much and iam gonna check this author to find other books
never thought a indian writes on webnovel. ... .liked the plot. .. u are setting a great example for the iindian outh to . ..express their imagination in writing a plot. ...
keep it up. ..
Gramma correction for title:
<Why Am I Holding on to You?>
And not:
<Why Am I Holding On You>
Whether the readers feel attracted to the book depends heavily on the title. If the title itself has wrong gramma, I would assume that the whole book will also be full of grammatical errors. Not that Iβm a gramma freak; you would be surprised that my gramma is not that great myself, but I would always choose to read the book of an author that has better gramma than me.
Actually their is only one problem you don't post new chapter every day...it's really annoying...Please post new chapter at a fix time....Pleaseππ€π€π€N story is really amazing....Plot are really crazy typeππ€
why you don't update new chapters ...it's been 10 days...i'm really going to die....please post new chapters.....i'm waiting.....your big fanππππ€
Actually, It's been long time you start posting new chapters...but you only post one chapter...Atleast try to post 2-3 chapters....One chapters feel like nothing....N you don't post last few days...so atleast try to manage this....We r waiting for new chapter ....β€οΈπ
hey, the story is really amazing....n please post more new chapters...you are delaying a lot last few days....i hope you post n keep it up.....π€·ποΈ
Recommended!!!!
beautiful Strong FL βοΈ
Handsome strong ML βοΈ
First love βοΈ
virgin protagonists βοΈ
Doting siblings βοΈ
Adorable jealous ML βοΈ
Hidden gem βοΈ
Possessive ML βοΈ
sweet fluffy relation between characters..... double checked βοΈβ βοΈβ
I wonder if I'm reviewing or adding tags, ....well, Then here's my short review,
I haven't yet crossed 100 chapters yet, but if anyone wants some relaxing time with nice plot line , characters and story description, it's definitely recommended. Though, it hasn't all that intense complex keeping reader at edge type plotline, but it indeed has a good storyline, it's worth giving a try,
Simply A beautifully well written and heartfelt book. I suggest this book to everyone. The author takes you on a fulfilled journey of fun, love, commitment and you hunger for more chaptersπ―β€β€β€β€β€β€ Serene and Soham are such a fun Super Couple. The other characters in the book are fun too. I hope the author continues with there fun journey because each and every character has fun personalities and I am loving the journey of Soham and Serene journey togetherβ€β€β€β€β€β€
A fine novelππππ . I really like the female lead's characterππ. a great novel,fun to read . I will really recommend you ππthe female lead is fierce kind and greatππππ
This novel is pretty interesting.
I'm pretty sure you won't regret reading, instead you will regret not reading it earlier. π₯
I reread it multiple times even tho the novel didn't end yet.π
if u like college and fun stories u will really love this book I promise. the story development is too good. the brotherly love is also written so so fun and exciting. I really fell in love with this book and I can not end my day without reading that day's update. this book is really worth reading. hope u enjoy it.....
the storyline is just amazing and i like Serene's character as to how she pulls her brothers out from the orphanage and also how she supports them as well as to the way she becomes an independent woman
Thanks author for the update, I was waiting for their how there conversation will go but it was peaceful. Now I really want to see what Harry's gonna do to her.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
The book is filled with lots of suspenseful bundles of sweetness and adventuresβ€β€β€ Soham and Serene are such a cute couple and the author takes you on a beautiful fun filled journey of there relationship. I am constantly wanting to read more of there journey together and the story definitely melts the heart with happiness and excitement and sweetnessβ£β£β£β€β€β€πππ
Am loving this book, it's just like a movie to me. Waiting for updates. Hope the update won't be long because I can't wait to know what happened next. Thanks author!! This book is one of my favorite books.β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπππβ₯οΈβ₯οΈπ
this novel is very very interesting and i love it alot......while reading this novel i don't know how many times my heart flutteredππ great work!!!
it's a good novel but why do you used Love and Produce game as your cover?? It's better to change it and use a new cover before you get copyright issueπ±π±
Ok so, it's for those of you who are looking for something fun. And if your one, then trust me you are at the right place! it's an amazing story with tons of fun and loving characters!!
i love the story
it's pretty catchy thats what makes it interesting to me I guess ππ
i love it
hope you'd write more author cos I [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
lovely and simple lovestory but mind soothing......gives readers a pleasent feeling and i love the male and female lead characters and personality a lot
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