Chapter comments on the chapter Exploitation of the book Osmosian Gamer(Rewrite Up)

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Shadowhead94
I like your second idea about talking half of the Phoenix Force.Maybe if he has half of the Phoenix Force maybe Jean will have chance of not going dark.
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Mateus_Belmond
thank you for the Chapter and for your hard work. I saw a comment about absorbing half the Phoenix and making it a dragon. the idea is good but it doesn't make sense. the Phoenix is ​​a force of destruction and creation, it is also the source of all psychic powers and I find it very difficult for it to hold up to half the power. what you can do is absorb a small part and evolve until you reach the level of the Phoenix while you establish a connection with Jean. you can also absorb the power of the iron fist and combine the power of the Phoenix with the power of the dragon. both powers complete each other. iron fist, dragon, chi, body and phoenix, psychic energy, mind. as for love interest, it is inevitable that the MC becomes a cosmic being so I recommend a small harem of 3 to 5 women with Jean and Natasha included.
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Light901
Single pairing with rougue we dont see her in enough self self insert stories
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Smurfclassic
Quicksilver power to train in accelerated time
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WolfLord
I hope you don't make Xavier go down the whole greater good to the point where his evil the comic seem to take him home and have a fan of the original animation so I've always seen him as the good guy and I like the talk between Professor and Logan. Thanks for the chapter on a good story
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KAMEHAMEHA2020
harem with all girls MCU
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ViniDrako23
I want a harem.
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Hk4747
If you want a unique suggestion how about this often the dragon is seen as the opposite of a phoenix so you have him absorb part of the Phoenix Force from Jean Grey that will free the Phoenix let Jean and the Phoenix have full control of their power none of that hole Madness BS and the part of the power the main character absorbed takes of form of a dragon Loli in his mindscape that refers to him as father and the Phoenix as its mother and you pick the powers make it age as much as you want as the story goes along
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Diveon123
no Phoenix force please. the gamer powers is OP on its own
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Otto_Gr_ssert
Half of the Phönix force and make it easier for Jean to control and make Xavier not the manipulate type
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d3mon1988
Option 3 aNd no harem please...... there enough of these
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sunschao
since getting the full phoenix force should be impossible i'd say let him make a deal with the phoenix force to absorb some of it
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Ahmed_Maged
I really hope you dont do cliche shit i mean this GUY is smart i like that very much i hope you dont change that and the whole take time to enjoy his life is bullshit this is the marvel universe not disney land you got over powered then you enjoy your fucking life but for him to stop training knowing that he could die any moment is just stupid what next? Will he make friend fell in love stay to protect them have a fucking harem i can already see the cliche rising
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Bogg_Dann
No absorbing phoenix, just telepathy and telekinesis, as for romance do a small harem starting with jean, and no black widow, its overused. And btw wont magneto's ability become useless for him once he gets telekinesis?
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Hees_Gelle
Personally I like the third option. He's already going to be OP from all the powers he gets so adding the phoenix force is overkill plus you would probably just forget about it soon enough anyway.
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Genist
Depending on which Mutant version Xavier's telepathy isn't different from Jean's, he's just had A LOT longer to practice it. It's also said he's one of THE strongest telepaths EVER.
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eclairsshi
Is this story doesn't have enough budget ?! It feels like the dead pool movie. How the hell in the entire X mansion there's only 5 people ?!!
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Zachariah_Browning
He should make his car out of The two strongest metals in the world.
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