Well constructed plots in each and every story. Descriptively tailored sequence of events and character sketched nicely. Good command over grammar.
I'm invested into this story already. Good work author!
Impressive way of delivering a message/impact in every story. Excellent command of English too. Very creative. I got easily immersed in the world and setup the author has designed exquisitely. It got me wondering what would happen next and why these things happen to the characters.
The writing quality is amazing not to mention every story it tells. I would love to read more of this but sadly I don't have coins to unlock chapters. One of the novels where you could feel the atmosphere inside the story.
Glad to read yours.
The story and the characterizations of the people is really good and interesting. You know how to pull people in and get immerse into the story.
There are a few grammar mistakes that don’t take from the story and easily fixed by reading over the story again.
Keep up the good work, author!
What I enjoy most from the story is the insight the author gives in how the main character feels as he is going through unbelievable trauma. The reactions and thought process of the main character is believable and really makes the story feel real and come alive. Especially with the vivid details that are given through the story that really gives the reader the chance to live in the moment of the story. That is a talent that not many authors have and it is something the author should be proud of.
for a second i had to pause and wonder who you truly are. You have a special way of describing your characters experiences that leaves the reader wanting more. Alas, hats down to you. You have truly brought to life a beautiful book.[img=fp]
This sorta genre ha always been my favorite and your book clearly shows that you put alot of thought in it. It's mysterious and suspenseful for me, and quite interesting and did a i mention that the characters, really like? Only read like a few chapters but i will continue reading!
Its been a while since I've read something like this. This book is well-written, and clearly with a good mastery of English. The stories themselves (as far as I have seen for myself), poke fun at some daily issues we have in our lives. Will definitely be returning for more of this.