Reviews of Marvel: The Homelander by CryingJoker - Webnovel

It was interesting at first since wishes were good but not too op from the get go. He became dark knight but we don't know anything how he started he just used timeskip no jutsu and an effective one at that. He Doesn't Have THE DARK KNIGHT persona. He Started Playing Fanboy By Making Suits For All The Avengers Evn Though He Haven't evn Met them yet. he has telekinesis, teleportation,all Demon slayer sword styles,etc etc At This Pnt He Is taking out abilities card out of his ass. AND HE DIDN'T SHOW ANY BATMAN SCENE AT ALL except klaus. IT turned Good To Shit.

The start just puts me off too much. Basically any story that starts with wishes is going to have the problem of there's always going to be something better you could have wished for. Plus this title is pretty misleading calling it the Dark Knight when he has superpowers and magical abilities which completely takes away from Batman's original appeal.

Writing quality: 2.0 - Reason being the structure and the absence of comas and coherence in the paragraphs, should work on that. Updates: 3.0 - Average, the novel it is just starting so I cannot form a sound opinion about it, hence a middle score. Story Development: 2.0 - The chapters are more or less a summary of sorts and the events occur to fast for the reader to get into sync with the story, giving way to some misunderstandings and even detachment to the readers, at the end of the day I wouldn't be checking if this updates or not because of that detachment feeling. Character Design: 1.0 - Taking into account all the above mentioned, I have to say that these characters are just following a robotic script (from my point of view) there is no relatable feeling even with the mc. This gives the reader the feeling that something doesn't add up and because of that people starts to look for plot-holes and personality mistakes. World Background: 5.0 - Marvel world. I dropped where mc and Natasha declare their love in a nonsensical way just for the sake of it. There was no sense of romance whatsoever and went from 0 to 100 to quickly for me to take this seriously. Be sure to read at least until that point to form your own opinion before giving a review as my opinion may differ from others, remember this is my perspective of this work and it is not absolute.