Why was the chapters deleted? I loved this fanfic! Are you going to rewrite or continue it? If your not could you upload the chapters again so i can reread it when Iβm boreβ¦. thanks!
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idk what to say it's good for me
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imagine loving someone only to let go through a world of r*pe and torture because they wouldn't be strong that way and he had so many wishes without limits yet makes himself weak this is why reincarnated novels where the mc gets wishes with no limits usually have a very shaky if not downright trash plots like this
quite interesting story, his status window until now hasn't been shown again, it should be more than the last status shown so it would be nice if it would be updated
story feels like a summary like u are hearing a short note about the whole mcu franchise.
the charecter are twisted for our wishfullfillment.i mean nat won't fall in love with somebody so soon.expecially some buisness manics like our mc.but she did.
he is way childish and is like a kid who found a game and living in game.not feeling real or absorbed by the story.
It was interesting at first since wishes were good but not too op from the get go. He became dark knight but we don't know anything how he started he just used timeskip no jutsu and an effective one at that. He Doesn't Have THE DARK KNIGHT persona. He Started Playing Fanboy By Making Suits For All The Avengers Evn Though He Haven't evn Met them yet. he has telekinesis, teleportation,all Demon slayer sword styles,etc etc At This Pnt He Is taking out abilities card out of his ass.
AND HE DIDN'T SHOW ANY BATMAN SCENE AT ALL except klaus. IT turned Good To Shit.
Mc is so cringe thinking about "his girl" that he hasn't even met to the point of obsession while simultaneously allowing her to be tortured so she can "be strong" like wtf
The start just puts me off too much. Basically any story that starts with wishes is going to have the problem of there's always going to be something better you could have wished for. Plus this title is pretty misleading calling it the Dark Knight when he has superpowers and magical abilities which completely takes away from Batman's original appeal.
Poor execution, terrible grammar and punctuation, bland story.
Do you not use Microsoft Office Word? Even that would improve the quality of your writing.
Story-wise, it's too cliche and with the exact same take on the MCU we've seen in every fan-fic on this site.
Dude giving 5 stars to show support as I'm seeing stability of updates dropping so don't drop it okay........................................................πππππ
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The Grammar is good and mistakes few, but the sentences aren't very articulate (3/5)
Story Development is poor: Massive timeskips of 3, 6 and 11 years at a time. The storyline has little to no direction and the few conflicts there are last 1 chapter at most. (2/5)
The MC has no personality and the other characters act differently than movie cannon. Alternate perspectives are done poorly and the MC pulls new powers out of his ass(2/5)
The story is in constant threat of being dropped because the author has lost all motivation to continue writing. The author has kept the chapters consistently long though. (3/5)
The world background is a copy and paste of an established and successful cinematic universe, would have gotten 4/5 had the author not consistently screwed up the sequence of events and the ages of characters. It would also do the author well to describe the world more . (3/5)
The story is bad, the authors attitude towards readers and his own work is terrible, but at least it is readable and somewhat enjoyable thus-far (as of chapter 13).
Eurm.... This have those cliche type of isekai with 5 wish.. I wouldn't comment much on his stupidly flaw wish just because he want to make it complicated. I know author think hard on what wish he want, but it's bad and you make it so complicated in wording that it turn flawed. (I want to have enhanced brain more than mortal human have just to learn observation haki? And then you want a tony IQ with 100x faster in learning? Can't you just... Wait, I'm complaining about the wish right? Sorry, I'm going to stop now..
One of the amazing and interesting fan fics on this app. Also not like most that make the mc to op which just makes them boring this one the mc is training and has to get srtonger by his means.
Writing quality: 2.0 - Reason being the structure and the absence of comas and coherence in the paragraphs, should work on that.
Updates: 3.0 - Average, the novel it is just starting so I cannot form a sound opinion about it, hence a middle score.
Story Development: 2.0 - The chapters are more or less a summary of sorts and the events occur to fast for the reader to get into sync with the story, giving way to some misunderstandings and even detachment to the readers, at the end of the day I wouldn't be checking if this updates or not because of that detachment feeling.
Character Design: 1.0 - Taking into account all the above mentioned, I have to say that these characters are just following a robotic script (from my point of view) there is no relatable feeling even with the mc. This gives the reader the feeling that something doesn't add up and because of that people starts to look for plot-holes and personality mistakes.
World Background: 5.0 - Marvel world.
I dropped where mc and Natasha declare their love in a nonsensical way just for the sake of it. There was no sense of romance whatsoever and went from 0 to 100 to quickly for me to take this seriously.
Be sure to read at least until that point to form your own opinion before giving a review as my opinion may differ from others, remember this is my perspective of this work and it is not absolute.
well this shitty restriction of 140 words is so time taking. well just wanted to say, please more chapters, I'm loving the way this story is developing, so please, update as soon as possible
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