Chapter comments on the chapter A new life as Ben 10 of the book Ben 10: Apex Hero

finally, some dissent fanfic available about ben10 .. good job man hope you continue this...

You did a fantastic job. I just can't wait for the next chapter. So please just release the next chapter as soon as possible. As for grammatical errors, I didn't find any I think. Suggestions:- • Upon receiving omnitrix he could try to get partial master control by using grey matter. • By using grey matter, he could record calculations, theory and different knowledge to later learn or go through in his human form.

interesting...

Realy good story, no complains from me

Thank you Author for this Amazing Chapter..

the only error is Lucy mann she is a cousin in law that wasn't related until the series started as his cousin married Lucy Mann older relative in the show,so you either making an Au or you might need to change the chapter

Eu amei esse capítulo😊!!! Ben organizado e desenvolvimento sem muito enrolação, consegui ver as mudanças sem ter que adiar desnecessáriamente as férias onde vai realmente ser uma aventura com muitas coisas a se explorar

I need more!!!

Awesome really love it 💯💯 anodites have been shown to throw energy and manipulate it to create constructs like green lantern, maybe it extends to more than that, maybe studying alien energy patterns and learn to copy them partially in human-form?

Meus Deus br tá em todo lugar

to think that I would find another "Ben 10" story and nothing less than the author of the different stories that I like. - I liked how you started with the intro of a little "Ben 10", so that some who do not know about the series or forgot, know what it will be about, I also liked how you made the most intelligent protagonist, nothing like the original It was too childish and not to mention that you have a plan to be stronger (not like the other typical protagonists who take everything as a game, to later regret their stupidities xD). - Not to mention that apart from the "oxnitris" it also trains its anodite form or whatever they call it, you also put characters that come out later and added key people to their circle of friends. - I could be putting a testament to everything that comes to mind, but I only put some things that I liked about the change in the series "ben 10", I just hope you get more chapters and that you don't leave it abandoned like other authors who they left after 20 or 80 episodes max xD. -Here I give you a photo of how Issei's sister or Issei himself would be in a girl version:

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when will the new chapter gonna come out can you realese it early please

cuando habrá un nuevo capitulo de avatar?

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

Wow, absolutely incredible, I am sure this fic will not disappoint me, I found it very interesting that you have delved into Ben's anonymous parents, I include it could help Gwen for a higher development when it comes to becoming lucky, I will be waiting for the next chapters, this has potential.

when's the next chapter.

disculpa por la pregunta autor-sama pero como cuando habrá nuevos capítulos de ben 10 y de avatar.

nice to see a ben 10 fan fic id love to see the erotic and inappropriate things that occur with ben and Gwen living and getting changed in a cramped rv together and what they get up to behind their grandfather and the bits hell overlook because of them being so young