Reviews of The Throne Of God by KazuyaVermillion - Webnovel

Read the 9 chapters. Liked the story and the characters. Like you said if you improve your English, it could be better. The story and the world design is pretty good. The author lacks some experience in story telling and his English is a bit lacking. Would like to read this in the future after you have improved your English skills.

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Gave it a shot, I read far worse but honestly it still has so many problems, that I wouldn’t know where to start... Surely pace and the way this world is presented just to name the first thing it comes to miNd The best way to get better is keep writing.

Well im not sure what to say i like how long the chapters are but for some reason i didnt feel like the story was going anywhere sadly its not my kinda read.