Writing this review with 41 ch read so take that into account.
Where you ever frustated, that main character is waiting for power up at least 20 ch or more? Well based on what i read so far, this novel for you. I already fall in love with the whole power system, main character and even some side characters(which is very rare). I canΒ΄t say this confidently but so far, this is at the top when you are looking for tags as: game system, magic, frindship or bit of comedy :)
0-0 Listen to me......this novel is too good. >< Bro this novel makes you want to spend fast pass or coins. -_- Other novels make me sometimes yawn or go on other apps while I'm reading. This novel is was so good that I wasted more than one hundred fast passes and create 5 more accounts to get 15 faster passes daily. WHYYYYY DID THE AUTHOR MAKE THIS A PREMIUM NOVEL> I hate/love the author. Also, the author should post the original photo of the MC. Also, the author shouldn't make this a harem novel. I don't want to see the pure, innocent, naive child be a Casanova. (0)_(0)
πI really hope you will come back and finish the book for real. π₯°I love this book and I don't say that often. writing quality is down graded for no other reason than your editor if you have one missing some incorrect words or wording here and there.π€ updating is down graded because it has been more than a year since me and your other fans have been left hanging.π
It was a good novel to read.
Spoiler warning: My only complain is itβs marked as completed. The Mc is still 12. He and his friends were fighting when it abruptly ends. But over all itβs like a great start to a book. Hopefully the author finishes it one day.
The story is really good even thought the money system sucks and thr mana system I still don't understand but the actually story concept and execution where really good.
He quit on it tho so 0 stars hate when authors do this
Is it dropped or what?.
It was just getting good and then it was dropped.
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Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! Iβd love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
First of all, the story is beautiful.
Especially the characters and the system are well written and designed.
I think the only problem is your speed.
Could you please write faster?
are you planning to come back any time soon. I miss the book already. it's a great book so long as you don't randomly end it. no one likes a never-ending cliffhanger. if you are waiting to find out if the book will sell as a hard copy. then yes it will I know because I will buy it. but at least give us a heads up about it.
as for my review I'm only giving you 4 stars for quality because many words need fixed. there are repeated words one after another in some cases and occasionally wrong words that should be replaced with others. next for updates I'm giving you 2 stars since you just randomly stoped. but that can be changed if you start up the book again. after all I know you have to take care of life right now. to me every thing else is excellent so 5 stars for them.
Author always drop his novels, stay away from him πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
OK this is an actual review. I started this novel because like you I thought since it said 5 stars and there a bunch of 5 stars ratings but that is NOT the case. I got to chapter 165 and this is toxic dumpster fire garbage. Why go so far as 165 you say? Well naively I tried to stick it out but it was just so bad.
Characters are about as cliche and flat as you can imagine. MC especially. There's no struggle, no real development because everything is handed to him on a silver platter. Even supposed impossible trials are magically achieved because he "happened" to somehow exploit some loophole. And if the Main Character is bad, the supporting characters are worse. They are just there to make the MC look good and power of friendship. No real value.
There also just no clear plot line. So much gets introduced and put aside. Like for the Main character is trying to climb a tower dungeon while also being a first year at a school while also being apart of some secret organization then out of nowhere he's attacked from different world from outer space?!? (yes this actually happened). Just makes no sense.
The writing quality is also clearly subpar. So many grammer and spelling mistakes it's comical. While I don't mean to be rude but this is no doubt machine translated at best with no revision effort afterward.
Updates was a positive. Very Consistent. But thats it.
Background is promising but not fleshed out very well or at all really. Many countries and places but no attempt to talk about them or make then anything more then stating "this town in this country".
Any way long story short, this is so trash, it's not even good enough to be guilty pleasure trash. Have some standards.
Is it really completed?
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Is this novel really finished? if it is, then what a waste of a wonderful novel.
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love the story, just finished it. Author I would love if U FINISH THIS PLSSSSπππ
I recommend reading this the story is great, we need more of the story u can't just drop a bomb and announce one of the characters as a female and not finish the story
i would love to say great ending but it costs too much to just end in the middle of the book as a finished story if I'd have known i wouldn't have wasted my fp and credits on a fraction of a finished book good story bad writer for doing half a job even if its for pleasure its stiil paying you for premium
Work this is an awesome story And I am really excited and can't wait to see what happens next. I just wish that they were update quicker.[img=recommend]
One of the best novels on here with a refreshing MC. I adore Whittaker which is why I donβt understand. Author why would you stab us in the heart like this? π₯Ίπππ
i love this book but i need more of it i hope you do more soon [img=update][img=recommend] but over all happy whit it all the way around .it keep me going
So far I have read 243 chapters. The book is well written. It draws one's interest and holds it. I'm one of those people that like to read everything in one go. So I'm a bit impatient for the next chapter. I have found a few spell check problems that everyone who uses it faces at some point with autocorrect. π The cover being used is beautiful only the character has long hair not short. Maybe you can get the one who made the cover to just change the the hair for a better fit with the story. It's really good art losing it would be a waste. Your choice.
Chapter 20 killed my expectations of the novel. Early romance just makes me uncomfortable. A nuisance and liability to his safety and it's a hype kill for me. The kid fell in love with a stalker in 1 interaction and shes already as important to him as his family. Sigh.
Really enjoyed the novel, so much so that I spent like $15 bucks of coins in order to catch up as much as I could so thank you for the good read so far. One thing I wanna ask tho, why isn't the novel updating rn? It's currently stop at 247.
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