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Houraji
I felt you, doing school stuff and writing side by side, experienced it once till now. But I see you gave your best and that's really important things.
Anyways back to your story. It has beautiful world, and strong female MC. The plot about ancient battle and fairytale-like creatures but more scary. Overall good, and I believe you'll improve. Just keep writing!
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iamaria
I can see you have put your maximum effort in developing the background, the story have very good pace with a strong female. She is leaving alone with her sister on a Carnivorous tree 🌲😧. I like the way you write the prologue in the start of your every Novel.
keep it up 👏
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Bluepuppet
Noice It feels so great here and the story is <(￣︶￣)> soo cool and the plot builds just fine I think when we work at it, it will turn out to be great and Update fast and also Update your second book Don't drop it just yet you cam write another story in that.
And this is my first review And i know its wierd right~ Hehe
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