Reviews of Zack Fair on Remnant by NoirZero11 - Webnovel

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4.55

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V1ce
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V1ce

This is a early review so things may improve or degrade from her but who can say. So far character interaction has been very well done while most (not all) characters have been portrayed rather accurately. Updating has been consise but since this fic is still early that may change. Chapter length is great as well. Some characters aren't portrayed as well as others but story progression isn't hasty and a slow build is always a plus in my books. If the quality stays consistent then this piece will be on is way to a 4 or 5 star in no time.
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1yr
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PinPonPun
Good..........................................................................................................................................
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4thEmperor
why did you stopped writing why did you stopped writing why did you stopped writing why did you stopped writing why did you stopped writing why did you stopped writing why did you stopped writing why did you stopped writing
3yr
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Gustavo_Teixeira_8799
great novel ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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3yr
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CharaWingdings
MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!
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4thEmperor
I like it, more chapter I like it, more chapter I like it, more chapter I like it, more chapter I like it, more chapter I like it, more chapter
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DemonicAtol77
Suggestion: if you ever get in writers block do a alternate reality of where the teenager that was supposed to die by truck-kun reincarnates instead
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I_Love_Fanfic
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Daoist934714
Con completa honestidad es un muy buen fan fic, con una historia bastante entretenida, en la cual el autor utilizo increiblemente bien la historia original y la adapto de forma tal que logro una muy buena interaccion entre su personaje original y los personajes de la historia.
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Kaito_Uzumaki
Not bad. Actually it's good. Really good but the update rate is a little slow. But Other than that The story is perfect. There are some grammer mistakes but he said it's his first book so it had to be expected. And the writing quality for a first timer is superb. Good Story. Keep up the good work
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Isaac_Fazio
Awesome story great opening and progression I can't wait to see where you lead us next one this awesome adventure. Also p.s. love that you actually used ff7 haven't been able to find one like this anywhere. Thanks so much die hard FF 7 fan hehehehe
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EMIYA
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EMIYA

5 en todas para que sigas publicando :v.............................................................................................................................
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NotEyptiandio
I fricking love it so keep it up, man. Here's the downpayment .
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AbelWizard
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Number1Fan
Had fun reading upto ch 14.Hope you keep pumping out more chapters so I can give you Power stones. Also for the people who are curious what really stood out for me in this novel is the awesome main character and wacky comedy it has going on much like one piece .
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Iron_Liver
Great novel,..................................................................................... ........................................................
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Iron_Liver
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Demonzor
I actually like the way the story Is going. The way its going though i feel like it going to turn into a op slice of life story also dont really like the yandere In the story donT really care for them
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herbert
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herbert

This is a fairly early review but so far its a pretty good read. The one major problem I see is the author is writing from a 3rd person point of view but then accidentally uses a 1st person point of view. It’s incredibly jarring and the only gripe I have. When the narrator is summarizing whats happening it shouldn’t seem like the MC is speaking.
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DvD_007
so far im liking the story, you are doing a good job at portraying Zacks character, my only problem is the whole sephiroth thing you got going on, but since i still don't know what you're going to do with that ill wait to see how it goes.
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Wriothesley_Main
All i can say is that this novel is great has lots of potential. I'm looking forward to the development of the story. But....If the author dare try to drop this novel...😄🔪
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PhoenixKnight
has a lot of potential Continues ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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