Reviews of The Change (book 1 of the change series) by Shyxlio - Webnovel

Little Sis I'm so proud! You did a great job! I was very impressed with your word structure and emotional writing maturity! Keep this up and your going to leave Big Bro behind! LOL

hey there just wanted to tell you that your book is amazing I'm so shocked that its not on top but hey little steps before big steps just work work work work work work...... Try to write as much as you can and then rest don't write STOP write STOP because that wont work not saying your doing that just wanted to give you a word of advise just do your absolute best this book is THE BESTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMMGG so amazing great job your doing a really great job with this novel.. I hope your pushing your self to the extreme to get your work done. indeed i have to commend you really great job... just do your best ... this books give me mixed emotion something i didnt expect but i should have lol................ bye

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Amazing plot. Highly recommended novel. Author did a great job in character development and plot making. Keep updating. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

The novel's plot is amazing, apart from the few errors here and there, it's great. The characters and the story's backgrund are well developed. It's just great.[img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend]

The book's plot is amazing, the flow is good. I like that the authour uploads daily. And I think that's it. Good luck Author, and I hope that your book becomes a big hit.[img=coins][img=update][img=recommend]

A totally hooked up novel. The story plot and background bis awesome. Dear Author, I really wish that you had been a Contracted author so that I can give you gifts. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

The novel has a good plot and it appears promising. Except few mistakes here and there, the story has potential to become a huge hit. I am looking forward for reading more. Keep up the good work author, I am rooting for you 👍

The story is quite good! It was well written... very minor mistakes. Characters are well developed. Just add a few subtle descriptions and improve the narration and you're all good good job!

Good story . Way of writing is nice. Flow is good. I suggest a bit of cliffhangers would be nice. I mean if you could make it a bit less obvious. That's all overall I like it. It's a nice one.

Writing Quality: I like the well-descriptive scenes, expressions and characters. However, there are some inconsistencies in capitalisation and other minor mistakes which doesn't affect the understanding of the story much. I would recommend the author to break down each paragraphs more, reduce commas and separate conversations from narration. That way, the ease of reading will improve drammatically. Stability of Updates: Daily updates? What more to say? 5 stars! Story Development: The story has an interesting premise of the MC bearing a child of someone influential, coupled with the early tension between characters. I like that. I'm also a fan of some foreshadowing done in some chapters. The story's pacing is a little slow but that's my personal opinion. Try to establish a theme for each chapter that would make your readers engross in the atmosphere of the theme. Character Design: The rapid introduction of multiple characters can cause some confusion betwee characters for the readers. I would recommend the author to establish some familiarisation with a small group of characters before introducing more. This will create characters that will stick into the minds of the readers more easily. World Background: The backgrounds are established early on. The main characters are rich and influential people. Hmm, I have nothing much to say further for this.

The story is impressive; I mean, you kinda know that the plotline is on point. I would suggest shorter paragraphs and less comma, and I also suggest improving on the narrative style.

the story is interesting while, the narration pace is fine but the narration style needs a boost, so the readers could enjoy the process more. while there are few mistakes which can be corrected while proofreading the story again.