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shacochan
This review will be for the story preceding the return arc as I have issues with it.
The world building is great. I liked how everything was developing in an exciting manner that could lead to an interesting plot point. The description of characters and places however are not properly described.
The characters are okay. By no means are they bland. Characters have unique personalities and their actions mirror them. There is a problem with how characters are sent off and how characters develop. It feels as if the author skipped showing us how a character went from a to b opting to show the result instead. Which bring me to my greatest issue.
The writing was great. The paces was marching proud and steadily. Characters were allocated appropriate time in the spotlight before moving on which was what hooked me into reading the story. It all changed when the 'return' arc attacked. The pacing was too slow. Chapters upon chapters just to describe a single event and they still did not help in describing the event taking place. The use of conjunctions and whatever filler I'm sure the author is aware of is scrambled in every sentence. The showing of the writing in your early chapters gradually became telling. Sentences are repeated constantly during and after the return arc. I stopped reading at 133 partially because the writing kept triggering me but mostly because of the wolf arc. The author could've done so much more. Many chapters were written leading to that moment but the result was disappointing. It couldve been so much more 1 way or the other. Since you did not see it as an author, I could not help but question whether the future of your writing would be as bland as that moment.
By no means is it a bad story. One of the better ones out there. Sadly I am a hard one to please.
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Daoist_ChaosLord
The story is fine and the quality of the writing is fine as well but this story isn't for me, the MC faints way too much for my liking. He faints after almost every fight...
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Worn_out_by
Writing quality is some of the best you can find for this site.
Updates are frequent like that part really.
Story development is good pretty rich for a goblin with pieces gone to make it a mystery that get filled either quickly or steadily i like that part honestly.
Character design is some of the best i have seen from goblin books and novels portrays their brutal and primitive selfs while they develop into something more its great and they a little crazy.
World background its good and being filled out over time from multiple povs read if you wanna know those povs.
Overall i’d say give it a shot if you’re patient you’ll like it it gets slow and sometimes dull and boring which is a bummer but it picks back up after a few chapters and i know a solid 3 or 5 were for the MC to grow others were traveling that i personally would have rather it been cut short a bit but the author seems to have his purpose so go him.
READ IT, TRY IT, ITS NOT BAD!
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IMightBeGod
i really like the feel of the story, it puts you not only in the head of the main character but also those around him, the only problem is that this story is to short, though that's not really a problem and is more of a personal opinion anyway i would suggest that people read this.
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DonnyRuckles
Genuinely this is my favorite book on this website in a long while the enemies are set up well the world feels massive and the main character feels strong but not overpowered so there is still a challenge. There is some lack of development visually for a lot of things but that's only minor and the way its going right now its not totally needed but I do find myself curious as to what the goblins exactly look like are they similar to the goblins "or orcs" from Tolkien are they WoW goblins or are they unique with a different spin on them visually. This story is very good but I feel as if I cant really smell the village or see it often I am just assuming what it is and then we move on there is nothing that sits to marinate in my mind. Some things I loved where the little details of the titles for army structure from the goblin king like Schemer and Brute these perfectly match the aesthetic of the goblins and I loved that. Another thing is that the enemies laid out in all directions of the King make his challenge feel genuine and while I know most likely he wont lose based on prior book knowledge I can't help but worry about his safety. Lastly I love how the author has not made these gobbos these greenskinned gits into some bastardized form of humans like I see happening so many times they are not becoming a peaceful and kind race that just wants peace they are not a green human they are goblins with personalities and quirks and beauty and ugliness and violence but they are goblins and they still feel that way often the monsters in novels start off as monsters but then just become human which isn't always bad but is often dissapointing. Anyways love this book have added it to my library and as someone who is fickle and picky about almost everything I think almost everything sucks that says something. Much love man hope you enjoy every second of creating this.
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DaoistShinobi
*Refrencing the synopsis*
Escanor “Who decided that?”
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strelking
Goblin king or Human King? Will the mc gain a Human Form in the future? The title for this novel is a little bit confusing, but after that, it's a pretty good novel.
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Brad_Thundermuffin
I think this is a very enjoyable story but it is definitely not perfect. I think that the main problem for me is how some of the chapters focus on only humans who so far havent even seen our mc. I think the author is definitely gonna tie them in but so far these chapter just leave me wanting my gobos again.
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Peltivierre
The book let's you dip in the mysteries but just enough for you to thirst for more. The grammar and words are clean and not rough on the eyes.
Would recommend 100%
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Ordenador
Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! 💪💪
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SilentKidd
Wow very intense I like it and I haven't even read the quarter of the chapter and I already like it you have talent keep going and never give up👍
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