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MortalLearner
Amazing! What a story you have. The female-lead character is absolutely unique and fascinating. The plot is well maintained. It will absolutely grip and hook the readers. Highly recommended!
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YIANUWANGXIAO
Ohh strong female lead Love it hehehe, okay to the story, the progression of the story is good and the character is well delivered over all it has a potential keep up the good work author nim <3
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Sweetdreamer20
WOW!!! This is just Woooooow!!!! Well done author it's beyond amazing π I'm at chapter 4 and I just couldn't resist the urge to share how amazing this novel is π’π
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SolAce
With well written characters and a charming princess who seeks to strengthen herself, I find this a book with great potential ! I could vividly imagine her actions and her personality that spelled freedom with a plot flow like the wind on her horse. Highly recommended to check it out readers !
If I were to point out the only issue preventing me from rating 5 stars, I would say it is the consistent grammar error we all hate: run-on sentences and misplaced commas. The most repeated one is when a comma is in front of one of the FANBOYS conjunctions; if I remember correctly, it doesnβt always need a comma as it can also be in between compound verbs and nouns. ( Ex: I have eaten my fill but still drank more. ) Iβve tried to point a few out to you, and I hope it helps.
However, other than this, I think you are on the right track from the get go ! Keep it up, Author !
( P.S. Goodnovel isnβt a good site to contract with as it appears to be filled with poor 1 star reviews, so I would suggest not to accept their proposal. )
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KristineElias
Okay, first and foremost I just want to say that this is an amazing story thus far. The chapters are long and the the writing style is very good.
I love a strong female lead and it is served here. Added to library. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!
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AuHNG
Hm, there were some grammar mistakes, and romance isn't my cup of tea, but so far interesting.
I read all the chapters so far.
There were some idiosyncrasies which I found were pointless, like the *flashback*, or present day:, because they're unnecessary, but other than that. Not much else I have to say.
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shenshi
It's quite an interesting story.. FL is strong and lovely. It's not like the usual Prince and Princess story.. Its something new and unique. Looking forward to see further chapters..
Great work.. ππAuthor.
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Scriptamagina
Well Done, Author! It is a very interesting and amazing story, I love the lead character's role. And the development of the plot is quite unique. Fighting!
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Jade_Wu
I looove iittt!! Thereβs much detail!ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»πΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπ₯³
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Whendhie1
Love the story. Not your usual prince and princess story and I like that. ππ
It has a lot of potential and I'm sure I'm going to enjoy reading it. Keep up the good work author. You are doing great β€οΈ
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Jo_J
Another excellent title on Webnovel! (I know how difficult is to create a titile that it is adequate to the content, etc... and inkston would accept it). It makes me inquisitive... about the content. That's a big part of success as writers say. From the synopisis looks that you have an attractive idea. The synopsis itself is nicely written. I also noticed while reading your story that the language is good... You don't struggle, like most of us (not english speaking) with tenses, style or grammar. Just pay more attention to punctuation, etc.
The storyline is interesting, characters are expressive.
You're doing a really great job!
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stupidboi100
This was actually quite a refreshing read and I must say the premise is quite striking with a strong female lead this story has the potential to be really grand and amazing keep it up author!
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Glenstonx
Hi author!!!
upon reading your story, im intrigued in the story line and the prologue got me hooked up of what happened why Lila was running and who could that man be and what happened to her children. Anyway, great story all in all I just think that it would be better to break off paragraphs into two because its stealing the momentum of the story.
readers gotta breathe too, yknow. So, yeah looking forward to your next updates! Good luck!
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H41
Amazing novel! I love all the characters introduced and the plot is interesting! Keep it up author, you're doing great! :>
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Luna_Yu
Love the story so far! The writing is really nice and I want to read more! Please publish daily. I can't wait to hear more about Lila and what happens!
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