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wintermist1994
Author here~, i just want to remind you guys that this novel isnot complex novel and isnot really well written like mostly KR novel, the title speak it loud thats is almost look like JP novel (I tried to make the MC not too braindead but dont expect me too much since i am still beginner loll). so i hope to future reader to not bully this noob too much lolll. itsnot that i forbid you to rate this novel lowly thou, since i myself know it better that my novel isnot good enough(trash) to compare with some well written Chinese or KR novel but i hope you guys dont set your expectation bar too high and then get dissappointed later. idk for JP one, because mostly JP isekai novel i read is almost all with some breindead MC, but idk i really enjoy read it tho, you could tell that my taste isnot that good loll. and in the future this novel will go premium(since i already sign the contract, but idk when it will go premium), i hope you guys still supporting me since i am a NEET that lost in his way of life loll (in sort i am broke and poor loll), i dont expect to get alot of gift from you guys, but i hope at least you guys still continued open the chapter when its release and still continued read it if you guys have some free time, maybe you guys think that i have some low self esteem or something, after seeing me rating my own work lowly, i do have some pride of myself after all i already write this far(the really first time novel i write was ended being abndoned in ch 6 loll so i never consider it as my first novel), but i need to be realistic, since i know there is alot of better novel out there that worth your guys money in webnovel after all XD. and idk i after reading that my novel got contracted i have this strange feeling that i want to continued this novel until the end, i will be honest with you guys, i once dreamed to be manga artist but give up after realizing i draw too slow, and its taking too much burden to my body for having less sleep after drawing all day. i know that i really not suited to became pro, maybe i am weakwilled or something, but i choose to have longlife rather than achieving my dream. since then i always lost of myself and don't have confident and always doubt myself. i never doing something else with passion like before when i still dreamed to be manga artist. idk maybe i have no motivation anymore... but... i really want to finish this novel till the end, maybe i will used this chance as my own therapy since i have nothing to do at home anyway, and somehow i do really want to change myself... i have enough of being burden of my family, i am sorry if i unconsciously sharing this with you (some random stranger that dwelling the webnovel). i just hope you guys that still enjoying this novel continued to supporting me... thank you... . . . and in the future i have a plan to (idk if it will be done) draw some character design and continent or maybe a world map for this novel. i just didnt know where should i upload it? ill be honest i dont use social media often, i even almost never playing it i have instagram but i just upload my few artwork there so...(yeah i am a weirdo, and loner lol) maybe its better if i make new instagram to upload some drawing about this novel (i dont want to use my old insta since i dont want my family know that i write ero-ero novel lolll. anyway enjoy your day, and thak you for supporting me. -noob author-
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wintermist1994
stop saying hurtfull thing to my novel and give a real critics that could make me grow. here! I give the low rating you guys want! if you want to insult anything just comment here! i will take all your insult! i am still a noob. but i hope you guys could be more understanding, i rather if you guys comment like daremyname that give low rating but with a reason so i could processing what i should do in the future. stop with shitty shit low IQ else. i give you guys a place here to insult me the author directly. i never bother if you guys give low rating, but a hurtful thing is still hurt for me as an author. I just want to cure my-self and have some meaning in my life, i know how trashy my novel is so i don't need your insult to remind me, what i need now is critic and advice that could make me a better writer. I just want to ignite my passion with this novel....
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YoungNoble
Author has promise. I liked the story world (I love skill steal / skill copy stories), but I did not like the MC (he might have worked in a gag story but not in a normal fantasy story with very little comedy -- he just ruined the plot) or the chuuni split personality subplot. These were largely the reason I eventually dropped the story. There were also some smaller things like the silly Japanese noises (why? This story is in English, it just feels weebish, especially when the sounds are so unusual that the author has to explain what they are anyway). And everyone is constantly laughing for no reason (fufufu, kilkilkil, etc) -- it's a book, not a manga. I couldn't keep going. As for the background plot, it felt like it was going in a good direction with some intrigue spelling out trouble on the horizon. So long story short, I think the author will be good if they keep going bit I think they need to read more real books to understand why the decisions in this one made so many people drop out. Otherwise I think this story would have been bigger / more popular
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FAQ_69
I enjoyed it tbh, u just wanna make sure to tolerate the grammar but overall it had potential, 'HAD' since it's been a yr without an update - I wonder what happened, i mean it's kind obvious with how affected the author is on the critique but i just truly winder if Author would atleast honour the story and those who enjoyed it by concluding the story, I would really appreciate it if author will provide appropriate closure for the story, it doesn't matter it's abrupt or anything i just want a closure for the story
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CharlotteH
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
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DaoistyfpBEy
I liked it although I tend to read novels like these like junk food therefore can’t really give you any real critiques not to mention it’s apparent that you already Stopped writing this novel😢 so the best I can say is don’t give up Writing I always think it’s good when someone expresses enough interest to actually do something
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Ya_Boi_Rizzin
Hey This Is Pretty Good, Need A Bit Of Polishing About The Writing And Description, And If You Want To Make A Random Reader Interested To Your Novel You Need A Attractive Cover And Title And Better Longer Description About The Novels, Overall It's Ok, I Guess.
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nirnoy
Warning This novel kill brain cells... Warning This novel kill brain cells... Warning This novel kill brain cells... Warning This novel kill brain cells... Warning This novel kill brain cells... Warning This novel kill brain cells...
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Bobainox
I really like this novels, started reading because the tag it has i like them, started good later i hated a little the mc thinking but his development after the initial start is nice, really like it alot!!!. cheers to author because its not easy to make a novel and for me its a 5 star so far!
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Lili_Kilo
why I can't remove this novel from my library... when I try multiple times the app crushed... and this novel still in my library... is it a bug? is there something forceful like like ? I'm really confused and angry 😡
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Love_venerable
@̶͇̝̪̻̹̟̝̮̻̠̭̰̟͉̹̞͎̔͒ͬ̀̾͌͗͐ͥͨͥ͗͑͒͌̂̐́͜[̷̴̡͙͔̘̬̬̮̯ͤ̌͌̓ͪ̑̍́͘#̧̜̳͚̦̙͓̄̀̃́̌̂̔͋͆̾͠"̣͔͔̲̲̹̣̞̰̞̞͈ͯ̄ͥ̽͆ͦ̈ͭ̾ͥ̓͑̀͡͠*̶̭͔͔̣̟̯̙͚̼̪ͪ̉̽͐͗ͪ̄̓̎ͧ͊ͣ̄ͪͮ́̚͝≠̰͎̮͉̼̪̫̹̀͗̋͐͋̏ͮ̀́͡͞ͅ}̷̑͊̀̃͌̇̅̅́͛̉ͬͯͩ̅͑́́͏̪̹̥̜̥̤͚̟̖͎̠̬̮̤̜̮+̣̘͚͚̟͗̅ͬͧ́́̌̃͗̋̉͑̏́́ͅ\͕̮̙̅̆̋̋ͮ̂̔̏̃̐ͯ̃̄͛́̚͢͝͠.̢͙̣̪̖̠̮̭͚͈̜͍̖̙̙̎̌͌̊̇͗ͩ̋ͫ́ę͓̻̰̤̱̻̹̺̟̙̟̼͔̳̜́ͩ̇̔ͩͬ̽͒̊̊͜͡͝&̸̧̟͉͓͔̪̟̫͓̰̩̼̦̟̫ͯ̂͛ͣ͌̾ͦ̉͋ͪͥ̍͗̽͐͂̀͞#̵̮͚̱͍͚̟ͫ͛̍ͯͮ̃̈́͋͗͌ͩ̅̚͢͟͟ ͐̆̆ͫ͊͛ͩ҉̢͏̩̲͖̙̦̱̖͇̠ù̙̭̗̞̭͙̘͔̤̺̤̩̺̯͚̙ͦͮͧ̃͆̉ͧ̒ͯͩ̑̍̚͟ͅ€̡̈̑̉̀ͤͧ̋ͨͪͧ̈͌҉̸̮̭͕͖̻̲̜͔̜͝¤̧̹̭͖̞͎̪͓̰̲͇̠̳͍̲̫̮̒́͑̾̋ͫ͘̕ͅ£͕̮̩̲̪̜̝ͩͬ́ͯ̉͌̉͑ͮͧ͘͜ͅè̶̙͓̩͉̱̲̝͎̲̻͕̫ͩ̏ͧͨͪ̓̇̒͂̅̏ͯ̿ͧ̚͟͟͞͝%͑͋͑͑ͫͨ̄͗̋̿͂̽̇҉͕̗̝̯̻̪̻̭̜͎̹̖͈̰͈͔͘͢͡!̹͍̹̰͍̬̙̟̥̭̫͎̮̖̜ͬ͊ͬ̇ͪ͛ͤ̎ͭ́̍̔͒͐̂͐͒͠͝ͅ@̵̗̰̦̲͚͈͎̤̗ͣͦ̽̋̌͌̃̂̎́͞͞#̞̲̣̭̥̭͖̬͔̳̇͋̋ͬ͆̆̈̉̑̽͌ͨ̽̔̅̒͟͢[͗̓̓̓̆̒̆͂̿̈́ͪ͆ͧͪ҉̬̤̻̳̬̮̗̜͈͜ͅ~̶̴̢̦̳͇̮͔̩̮̺̪̼̱̺͈̖̻͉͑̔͆̏ͦ͗͌͂̎̅̀̿̕͘ meh
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Roger_MH
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BlueDragon13
I think the story is sort of good and a bit interesting. I don't know if I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
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shyfix291
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EddyZ
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EddyZ

Great story so far. Updates are constant with one nearly every day, with only a few exceptions. This story is definitely a power fantasy as the MC becomes OP rather fast, though it still provides enough entertainment to stay fun to read. In the beginning, the world lore is somewhat basic but it is later expanded upon in the later chapters. Overall this is still one of my favorite fanfics, has both action and comedy with a bit of mystery as the MC tries to find out about his birth. Fair warning this is definitely a harem story with multiple Mature chapters, though they can be skipped if you want.
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zcxx
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zcxx

Not for me i guess, the story is fast pace thats ok if you have a good character interaction or dialogue. But for me its too force, the character interaction are just literally just that a dialogue there's not much narration in which you can guess or tell how a character feel in that scenario. Yes, you change pov to know what the other thoughts of the mc but i just dont feel like the other character is a female, i think its too force like a male pretending to be a female char. I know you want an onee-san or milf but if you are going to create a pov for them you should have atleast extensive experience in interacting with them.
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Dunamis
It just feels very basic plotwise and goals of the dude aren't anything special either. Couldn't get interested in it. The dialouge is uncomfy too. Ik it's an ******* author but this is my honest feelings on it.
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daoist_buttlover
It's a good first effort. Pacing is good, but like others I got very turned off at the part with the aphrodisiac. Also, it became very tiring to read because there are a looooot of grammar mistakes. Try hiring an editor maybe? Getting an outsider opinion would help, especially if they're good at english. Good luck with the novel but I don't think I can continue, mainly due to the weird rape scene and the grammar issues
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Kumaa

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LastNovemberx
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ad_d

good story yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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Mischief
Going to need to be edited before reading. It's just bad. Couldn't finish the first chapter. Gave the 1 star for grammer and 3s for everything else since I'm trying to be somewhat fair. Thanks for the attempt. It can't be easy to write, especially if it's not your native language.
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HalfStepImmortal
tbh its not really a bad novel if you can put up with the bad grammar and a super delusional mc but he gets relatively powerful quite quickly but I don't think there is much character development either but I won't complain any more than I have cos it not like I could possibly do any better, yos
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Ryantrix
To be honest, This novel is indeed not in the same league as Chinese novels and some other 1000+ chapter novels, I think the author's primary language is not English, so there are many grammatical mistakes, author uses decimal instead of comma in numbers( like 1.000 instead of 1,000.. it irritates me). Lets not even start with MC, it's stated that he is 26 years old, but he acts like 12 years old, he has a huge 8th grade syndrome, he blames his faults to the "immortal dragon" hidden in him, he remains clueless to his strength, that makes his decisions crappy ( he is afraid to get into trouble with nobles over his business, basically he doesn't do business coz he know he will get trouble from nobles, but he doesn't understand he is strong, and they could be weak. But still i will read this novel despite the cringgy feeling it gives, coz its fun novel nothing too serious.
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SopitaCx
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MantaG
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MantaG

like it . .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
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DJROM
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DJROM

worst 👎 of all novel I have read📖 basically there's nothing in this novel . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
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mugetsu700
thank you. .. . .. . . . .. .. . . .. . .. .. .. . . . .. . . ... . . . ... .. . ... . thanks you, excellent history. ......................................
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SUBHADEEP_SARKAR
This story is very good ....................................................................................................................
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Holger_Thieme
A promising start into the world, but the story quickly devolves into uncessant bragging and acting like a stupid grade-schooler. If you want to read something worth your time, choose something else.
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derick_moore
The author is obsessed with *** with older women and while the novel was hard to read I wanted to give it a chance because a lot of novels improve after the initial chapters. However this one does not it doubles down on *** as its theme. Any potential the novel had suffers because of the authors obsession with ***. To make matters worse the author removes reviews trying to hide the novels real rating.
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