Reviews of Lucifer's Descendant System by Zhanye - Webnovel

I was surprised, I couldn't find any point to criticize in this story, the rhythm is good, perfect grammar, the author knows how to express well what is happening in the scene, besides always making me want to read more. POST MORE CHAPTERS FASTER

173 chapters read: Unlike most other books on this site, i dont really have anything to criticize. The spelling and grammar is good, pacing is great and the character dev is decent too. I have read his other novels before rhis one, and I enjoyed those too, but there is clear improvement with this novel. It is work the read IMHO.

I don’t usually write reviews but this novel is just too great. Exceptionally good writing, good story, good characters, pretty much this just a great overall novel, the only thing for me is that the author really doesn’t seem to like writing chapters, it’s been over a year, and even before that it was unstable. Ignore everyone who’s talking about pedophilia no one cares + that has nothing to do with the book and it’s still great 🤡🫵

Ótima história, fiquei muito decepcionado com o autor por ter parado de atualizar a novel. Gostaria que ele voltasse para terminar esse enredo

It's good and well written but the pace is impossibly slow. 44 chapters in and he just got to level 2.. 10 chapters for just one dungeon is too much for me. Too much effort put into fillers and explaining every tiny little detail. Too bad but I'm dropping this even though the system and world building were interesting

So this is a good and enjoyable novel. The author doesn't seem to be bad at spelling or grammar. The story was also not too rushed but neither not too slow. The only criticism is that they can take quite a while to upload a new chapter. Now obviously there may be stuff going on for them irl but whenever they can, please come back a finish the book. It's a very enjoyable story and things were progressing nicely.

I’m giving this book one star because even though it’s a great book so far the author hasn’t posted a new chapter in over a year and ended right in the middle of the story which isn’t cool considering how much money was spent to read this book

i would rate it higher, but the author always broke promises for updates, uploads, and hasn't touched it in ten months. there will never be a satisfying ending, so don't waste your time.

I dont know whether to start reading or not, i can see that there havent been any new chapters in a while. Was this dropped by the author or is it on pause/break?

A great read, wish Author would update the Discord invite. I can not wait for this series to continue... have binge read to chapter 392, and eager for more.

really interesting plot and story flow is good

The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

My favourite novel. I can't find anything i don't like in that novel exept the fact that the autor didn't release for almost a year now hope to have more chap soon ^^

it's pretty awesome but why no updates you like almost never update your book

The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

Has author stopped writing lucifer? seems to be long gaps beetween chapters, i just started this? is it gonna be abandoned???????

Thank you for coming back❤️❤️❤️ I was starting to worry, so I just wanted to let you know I appreciate you, thanks again!

The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

So I hadn’t been on discord in a minute but I was apart of the writers discord for this book what happened to the discord?

This is not a book review, its an author review (Its realy bad)' The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

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overall a good book, but I have been traped on chapter 390 for 5mths because of privilege. if the author just actually wrote constantly then it would be fine as the chapters would eventually come out of privilege. do not read if you want an ending

The book is really good author just does noT update at all. also the discord server got spammed with fale accusations so if anyone knows if there is a New place to find images of characters then please let me know. also does anyone know when romance starts?

Can i have the discord i wanna see the characters pls

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Thanks author for creating this devil novel. I really like the mc but the other characters here are idiots but I think it's not bad comparing some of the arrogant people is just like the young master from ch novels. But my question here is where's your discord like you said you have a discord server. Can you post it bro?

ok i think its time to write my review... ireally really like this novel. it had a unique beginning and i got the feeling, that author really loves his story. BUT there are 2 main Issues: 1. his spelling is not very good, many mistakes, i often have to guess what he did mean... 2. his update stability is worse than his grammar. this is the second time he stops updating this novel. last time was several months. he didnt bother to explain or even announce his absence. i thought he dropped the novel, but then suddenly there were new chapters🤷‍♂️

Are you taking a break from writing? Stock piling chapters? Quit? The story is great but it hadn’t been updated for a month, if something happened, I hope you get better soon

Excellent writer and story, but unfortunately it seems like people are wasting golden tickets and power stones on a lazy writer that instead of dropping the story writes once in a while to keep privileged chapters locked. If you have a full time job and cannot write finish an arc and drop it. If you are lazy or in prison let readers know.

I LOVE the story, by the author is HORRIBLE about consistency. Daily updates for a week, then disappearing for a couple months. Then Repeat.

great beginning and character development. author disappears for long period of time and releases chapters extremely late. seems they don't care about their work or their fans and later chapters seem to go down hill. I've been a fan but these multiple long length disappearances and late chapter submissions shows the lack of care for the fans and overall the story. would not be surprised if it doesn't finish. I'd be skeptical to read and fall into an unfinished piece of work. one of the worst reads in terms of waiting for a new chapter and never hearing back from the author. I would recommend to read however be wary of the story never finishing or waiting long periods of time for another chapter