The author can make me feel moved and swayed just by her writings. I know it will be great in the future! Even though english was not her main language, she successfully elaborated the scenes in the novel. An effective author to make us pity the Main lead.
I read your novel my dear sister. And I'm so proud of you overcoming your hard works in doing your hobby. Keep on writing Ate! I know you can finish it! Fighting![img=faceslap][img=coins] I will recommend this to my friends and support you as well. I'm happy you made it almost one-fourth of your work![img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=update] I love how you made Cesia and I hope she can overcome her emotions and problems.
I am very happy with your Author's note, hope you are working to improve your shortcomings. All the best for that.
Coming back to the story, I love the impact created by quoting that couplet from the Bible. I loved the narration and the plotline. I wish you good luck with your endeavour. I will keep on reading it.
Hi Author! I like the beginning of the story, which makes it interesting and appealing to your readers because of the MC's suffering, we felt her pain and that is a plus for your readers. There are some grammar mistakes here and there but I know that could be improved. =) Great job! Keep up the good work, Author!
The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .
Author I sincerely believe that your story has a lot of potential. You probably need some editing and grammar corrections. But I was really hooked from the first chapters. They conveyed so much, you just had the ability to draw your readers into the flow of the story and feel empathy for Cesia.
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It's an interesting story. It starts as a horror (that is how I see it, the first chapters are really worrying), and then it turns into a mystery to find out what creature the MC is. (I have to admit that the title of the book gives a big clue about this, hehe)
There are some grammar mistakes, here and there.
Overall, it's different from what you usually find on this platform, so it's interesting to read.
Keep working on it, author!
Dear author I must say it is really intriguing story and your writing style is also so good...👏👏👏 The thoughts of FL you wrote so beautifully that I kept on reading next chapters...❤️❤️ I really loved the characters development...Your writting style and grammar is really great...I am looking forward for more to read...Keep up the good work...👏👏👏
Very well, before I start this I have to say the following, after finishing reading, I had but one question "Were is the rest?" like really were is it? This was a good read and when I got to the latest chapter, this was the only thing I could say!
Honestly, the world, the setting the characters, it just works, don't believe me? Just go and read it! You won't regret it!
I love the small sentences at the starting at the chapters, that is the one thing that made me look forward to the chapter as a whole.
Coming to the story, so far I am loving it. Your writing style is beautiful.
I am craving for more. I am just gonna add it in my library and will be waiting.
This story truly deserve a 5 star but if am looking for more, Maybe when there are more chapters I'll write a review again.
Keep it up. Love your story!!
Hey, I've been reading yOur book from the very start. It really get my attention. Hihi I'm excited and waiting for your update every week. 😇😇😇🌇[img=coins][img=exp][img=update]
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