Reviews of The System: Civilian Shinobi by Version_401 - Webnovel

As an author, it is my solemn duty to rate my novel as 5 stars...Do give it a read in your free time. I am probably not gonna copy canon except for the important arcs... I am trying to improve my writing skills and I hope you guys stick around... I'll end this as I always end my Author Notes!! Peace!!

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This fic was really good compared to most others there were quite a few things that I disagree with or think are kinda dumb but besides those moments it was great especially the start of the book solid start i was surprised when the MC was a native to the naruto world i guess you could say like hes not from our world and knows everything about the naruto world and i think it worked out great he doesnt really act like his age at the start or anywhere except near the end after the 3 year time skip because at that point his experiences would have shaped his personality into what it was but before that no he acts far more mature than he has any logical right to be and another i know i mentioned this in the comments before but like why did he not choose short range kamui it just makes no sense to me anyway imma end this now solid book i enjoyed it goodbye

so far everything seems ok and normal to me no racism of yet, from civilian perspective yup sounds about right especially since you are just alone no government power not even rich just a system you sure to eliminate any threat that could possibly harm you in every possible way

Love the atmosphere the author has created with this story, great comedy sense

Well not that good but yeah it's nice i guess, the first chapters left me amazed 👏👏i just don't like the mc personality ugh he is too cringy the development of story is OKAY the world background ofc is amazing we are talking abt naru-verse here, writing quality is good too!there are some Grammer mistakes but they are barley noticeable (I guess so hmm ?? I mean it's understandable and clear.....)

A good story and a very fun read my only complaint is that I think you’ve gone overboard with the bloodlines. And since he already has them why has he not implanted the Sharingan to give himself the EMS.

I love reading this novel. it has a lot of interesting plot scenes that I didn't see it coming. I hope Author-san will continue this novel, and update soon.

Author made it so danzo can spam a gengutsu which can only be used once every 3 years... Idunno why but when danzo came into the story it made it bland maybe story development or bland writing or just the plot hole that I hate.

Good read, it's not a mess of a fanfiction, Good for light read. Give it a try😉 ......................................................................

its a really good book, i dont now how People dont like this ,...............................................................me.mmmmmmmmmmm[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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This got to be one of the brilliant naruto fanfic out there... I like MC passion, dedication and his humor too. I just came to love with this book...Please Author complete it to the end.. I would love to see his future battles

La verdad me encanto es muy buena aunque tiene un par de hoyos en la trama es muy entretenida una pena que ya no continue ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Did you dropped the story its been so long since you updated. So im just wondering. its a good story I liked how it was going just that i want to stock up on chapters.

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i don't think you writing naruto fanfic cause i think the story is too much different from naruto that i know and i just dropped (Stop reading) after a few chapters and i can't keep continuing read this cause i have to turn of my brain to read this. i know writing a fan fiction is not easy as it seems but....*sigh*i drop it here

A parte do romance eu não gostei, não gosto da Ino, preferia que o MC tivesse um romance com a Hinata ou a Temari, mas o resto foi bom------------------------------

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it went from great to being absolute trash. probably the biggest waste of my time ever. I don't think the author can ascribe challenges unto the MC without making him look ret*rded. he's also konoha's b*tch and takes it in the ass regularly from from danzo and others

Novel has a good premise and implementation but the mc personality is so bad hes just a little dog for konoha. i swear they could order him to kill himself and he wouldnt even hesitate. adter killing himself he would prbably think he still owes the village even more too.

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This is very very very very interesting that cuz it's an entertaining story. I hope people will read it more often and that people update soon.

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Well thIs was a nice rwad and the story progression is pretty neat and the way it looks For the future is good But there are minor grammer And formatting mistakes that annoy the flow of The story.

Pretty good start but the author started slipping off. Too many plot holes and MC geting dumber by the chapter. Maybe the author is getting pressured. I don’t know. Judge for yourself. FYI, I stop at ch 78

just dont drop it, well i admit there are some 'problem' but yeah i dont mind it, it was already good enough u can continue the story until now, well good luck...... i guess or thanks or whatever, my english suck pregante

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