Chapter comments on the chapter Prologue - The Beginning of the book Shiki The Golden Lion

FYI. This is the Prologue and Chapter 1.

cant wait for more chapters keep up the work dude

great story but please don't make a harem, it destroys the story and makes it boring to see him go after a woman, it would be perfect if he didn't even have a woman, you decide ...

He should've just killed all in his way he's way to merciful...

Nice chapter But he's just too soft i hope i doesn't continue like that But it's just my preference Good story tho

Since he no longer has the weakness of the devil fruit why not eat the goro goro no mi before Enel

Wait a minute what? He said there was no trace of Shiki’s will so how would he be able to use Conqueror’s Haki? That’s nonsense, he’s got the weak willpower of a nobody.

Shiki x Hancock Since she is a pity, since with Luffy's personality it is impossible for him to respond to her feelings.

Yo he should create the flying dutchman since he man make things float 😂

Thank you for the prologue !!! The start is great to continue like this !! That he is a floating island like ship, that he saves part of the inhabitants of Ohara (without anyone knowing) while protecting Robin and Ace's mother to give birth normally all by giving Ace to Garp. That he recruits Boa Hancock and Perona (saving them and making them fall in love), Enel before he eats his fruit, kuina. For his age he is looking for Myskina Acier, the scientist who created "pure gold" so as not to grow old or grow younger since he is still young. Thank you I made you by just some ideas.

Thanks for the chapter

I hope that its just impel down that has a messup time line and not the whole op world. ty ty ty

This is amazing

epic

Ok i can see that i will like this fic so please dont make him afool and you can have all my stones

nice.

just pick this up hoping for a good read. so far enjoying the 1st chapter.

I would have so taken the whole ship. Food and gold potential devil fruit.🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑

Interesting 🔥🔥 Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Definitely a very enjoyable prologue and chapter 1, really looking forward to what you come up with next for the story. Thank you very much