Chapter comments on the chapter Death From Above of the book Shiki The Golden Lion

Srsly just kill the slaves this sucks saving damnsel lol is this chinese young master shit lololol

The new shiki is a

A thought: Will this Shiki be making any alterations to his appearance? From what I gathered he hasn't even had a bath since his escape. So right now he is wearing prisoner clothes, likely dirty and stained, and hasn't washed for who knows how long. His hair would probably be like one giant frizzy knotted mess right now from being unwashed and all the flying around. I would assume he has a full beard that hasn't been trimmed in ages. Can you you imagine what kind of image this guy must have right now. He must look like some kind of dirty, shaggy hobo in prison rags. Lol. Will you be keeping his character's "mane" of hair or will you be giving him a cut? It'd probably do wonders at making him look younger, something he'd likely want since he was in his early 20s before being dropped in the body. For whatever reason I can really see him pulling off a fade cut. Though I think a Jason Momoa viking-ish cut or Witcher Geralt would fit well to his whole "Golden Lion" motif. Assuming he doesn't want to just rebrand himself, as it were.

What did the pirate mean by mewling whore last night, were they already raped? If so then **** you author. Anyways thanks for the chapter.

So Yeah that was... SOMTHING A little boring at first with whole you trying find a reason for him to be a yunko and then the whole damsel in distress thing you have there Yeah i dont like that shit i mean the first ship you see is slave ship and actually have two hot woman with strong personality what next will he find a great cook once he land on the island!

Fucking hell what a knight in shining armor mc is this? Hayyst the mc is to soft

Kill the two dirty sluuuutssss annoiing irene acts like arrogant bich yeH kill her

Good chapter. I've never seen a Shiki SI before so this will be a new experience. I hope you keep it up. A lot of fanfic stories on here tend to die off after a dozen or so chapters. This has a lot of kingdom-building potential, and given how powerful Shiki is that might be the best approach to focus on since, from a purely martial aspect, he may not have much challenge as long as he is careful (he was beaten before, afterall, so he isn't invincible by any means). Though Im sure he still has potential he can milk from his fruit power. Ever think of finding Fujitora? I'd be curious to see how that'd work out, considering the similarities they share in fruit abilities.

This is a very abrupt way to introduce some characters.... who are female.

I dont understand the fanfic authors that take an existing power of one piece and change it to suite their agenda. Shikis power isnt gravity control. It's more akine to gravity nullification combined with telekinesis. His strongest point in the movie seems to be that he can lower the weight of something all the way down to nothing and then itll float forever. It's a devil fruit that has large scale permanent effects and can be used on whole islands. It's already disgustingly broken. Just float a big island above your enemies and then cancel the gravity nullification... watch how people get crushed to death by extreme weight and impact.

Bruh he look like minato? So hes putting together a harem Irene belserioN with a mythical Zoan :sage dragon, it allows her to consume anything and convert it to life force which she can channel into her body or others to empower them or increase their lofe span Konan can eat a paper logia Next find juvia on the rain island where she eats honeyqueens devil fruit

protagonist is kind of hypocritical.

Why not atacking the holy land free the slave

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Thanks for the chapter

thats damn good writing , hope you will update often , go to patreon its good materiel

I hope he will not have a harem and they will be just a crewmates.

Thanks for the chapter!

Good Work