Solid book. I’ve only read about half of it, but the story is definitely intriguing. The grammar is definitely in need of some editing, but not so much that I stopped reading. I just wish I didn’t have to buy the book to finish It though!:/
This is one of the best books I’ve ever read I’m really picky on books I read and many other things but beside that point this book kept me in every moment even the ones I was so mad about with some characters but god do I love this book please keep I up writer it’s amazing❤️
20 chapters in and i can already tell i'm gonna enjoy this series!
pros: super fun characters who have very fun dynamics between each other! i love the dumb but outspoken mc! interesting premise! mostly smooth and pretty writing with good detail! although...
cons: a lot of run-in sentences and a noticeable lack of commas and other tone/pace indicators. i don't find it too disruptive, but it does read awkwardly for me every once in a while. grammar mistakes as well: "will" being used instead of "we'll", "destruction" being used instead of "distraction" etc. but again, it doesn't take too much away from how engaging i find the story to be in general.
so basically it'd be cool if author could go back and fix some of their writing or have a proofreader for that job BUT i like what the author is cooking here and i am gonna continue reading :d
This book is one good book I have read.
Excellent author.
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I’ve seen many book but your make feels like I’ m also in the book and feeling every single that that the prince and his charming Goddess feel.You can live it..The books alive..love it
I loved this novel so much, the characters are si cute and sweet. Though the ML suffer in his previus life, he could meet someone who loved him ando they are a perfecto match.
This is such a cute short story🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰. I love the characters and the author has good storytelling skills. There are some minor errors but it doesn’t affect the story and they’re hardly noticeable. Overall if in love with this story and the author so I will be reading all of their stories.
I really liked this novel. I want to translate it into my native language. Can I place a translation on an independent Internet resource with links to this site?
the story is interesting, fun and makes you want to keep reading right till the end and it also has some spicy scenes. over all an amazing story it also be cool if it was made into a comic as well.
This book is amazing.
#awesomeness##
The book is so freaking cool, the characters are so good, everything about this book is just superb.
I love it 💕💕💕💕💕
Piece of art, full of good and high spirits.
Best medecine after a depressing day.
I really hope you will keep writing for a long time.
I wish we could a little more of epilogue but really happy with the story.
The beginning wasn't that great but the middle and ending was fun to read. I even hoped for more chapters but the story was finished up nicely. This is one of the very few books on Webnovel that I really liked reading.
A wonderful story!
It is a great read especially when you are searching for something fun to read.
The characters are lovely and entertaining (some of their witty remarks make my day).
Some may argue that there isn't much world building; however, in my opinion, the information provided regarding the world/setting is enough for the story thus far.
Though there are unresolved issues in the end, if I would focus on the journey of the couple main couple to be together, I am satisfied with the story so far.
Nevertheless, I hope that they will be resolved someday if (and that's a very big if) the author decide to write a 2nd installment.
Give it a try and find out. ^_^
Enjoy reading!
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Thank you so much, author-nim for sharing this story.
I appreciate your hard work and effort in writing this.
Have a good day and stay safe!
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Really good read! The story at the end left some questions unanswered like what happened with the gods trying to take revenge and where the relationship between Wu Fan and Ying Tie is going. Also, in the beginning the characters can be quite obnoxious. But at the end it is a solid read, with great worldbuilding and the MC is fun!
A very entertaining and engaging read. Totally recommend reading this. The interactions between main characters are hilarious. Looking forward to check out more works by author. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
it's really awesome story ,with good story plots, and main lead characters are well described, the story is total combination of all emotions .I really loved especially the bickering between main lead and second lead couples. its really fantastic 😍😍😍😍😍♥️♥️♥️♥️ .author should be really appreciated for the writing of story with good story plot,well describing characters and emotions. l really liked it a lot.[img=recommend]
I just love all the characters in the novel because they are just hilarious & cute. There are some sweet, adorable & funny moments. All in all, I enjoyed the novel very much. (♡ ὅ ◡ ὅ )ʃ♡
Love it .... Im am still in Ch 3 and im hooking with it ..
Thank YOU author .........................................
RECOMMENDED.
5 STAR
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To start off, I'm writing this review after finishing the entire novel. Not gonna lie it kinda surprised me. I didn't expect it to be so good. The MC is absolutely hilarious. Seriously I had to pause many times while reading to laugh and appreciate the humor of the MC. For me, the humor was the defining factor of the novel and why I liked it so much.
Like I said before overall the novel was amazing. There was a lot going on but the author did a good job tying all the different pieces together. And there was a lot in the mix, from comedy to transmigration to different realms and universes to a quest to save the world to powers and of course romance was sprinkled in there as well. I definitely missed out on somethings, but I think it's fair to say that there was a lot going on. Most of it flowed between the various elements quite well but there was a part regarding the transmigration and alternate existences that was a little hard to follow at first, but it all made sense gradually. Other than that, the novel was extremely well-developed and I would say almost everything wrapped up nicely in the end. The one loose end is debatable and honestly somewhat unnecessary in the grand scheme of things, so I wasn't mad about it.
In my opinion the characters in this novel were fantastically written, and I truly adored them or, for the not so nice ones, I at least acknowledged their importance to the plot. Kudos to the author on that. Their dialogues and interactions were very natural and flowed well. I will say that there were some syntax errors. It's clear what word was intended, so reading the story and the meaning were unaffected.
ok this review is already way to long haha, so I'll stop here. If you are thinking of giving this novel a chance, PLEASE DO. I highly recommend it, and you'll probably get drawn into it. It's on the lighter side and is a really fun read.
Kudos to the author for creating such a wonderful novel, and thank you for your hard work and dedication in writing it!! ♥♥♥
Tani_Nick